Reviews for Gatekeepers 21:Unknown Variables
T chapter 3 . 8/11/2004
when are you going to write another chapter? this is really quite interesting!
DayDreamer9 chapter 3 . 6/4/2004
Man, I feel sorry for Jack. At least Stephi heard him at the end, I think. That Ghost Girl is a meanie. Keep up the good work. You write good GateKeeper Fics :)
Death2Afangirl chapter 3 . 4/30/2004
Great story. I was already inspired by the series to make a fanfic and my transfer is very similar to Jack. Just way more poetic. Keep up the good work and be sure to look out for mine.
alexial-osidius chapter 1 . 1/8/2004
Hey! great story man! I'll keep reading later. Seriously, so far so good. Just a few, and really, only a few grammar mistakes, but that's just me being stoopid. I don't like it when people start correcting me. Anyways, I really like what you've did with the story. I could imagine how you're new added characters look like :) Thomas looks hot. So... yeh, I'll keep reading now... *thumbs up* my stories suck... and i haven't updated... yay... so i'll cya later! keep up the good work!
Someone chapter 3 . 12/1/2003
::applauds sarcastically:: Bravo, bravo, I'm sneaking away from Maths class in Canada to write this on the school computers. Was extremely bored so just re-read your story again.
Houtori chapter 1 . 11/25/2003
Nice story, but it's hard to compare with your other one (Gatekeepers:The Wild Geese, right?). Anyway, keep up the stories!
Another Dark Bring chapter 3 . 11/7/2003
Apa khabar? Was reading your other GK fic. Don't think I'm thorugh all of them yet. This is looking...better tahn the other one? Well, I sorta overdose on angst, so that's why it appeals to me so much. Haven't had any Gatekeepers actually turning into Invaders yet, so...think Yuurei Shoujo must look like Jack's girlfriend or summat...more angst coming up? Would really like a scene for Nazo...using his twin Gates and blowing stuff up and such...
Timekeeper chapter 3 . 11/1/2003
Hehe, I found out how to submit multiple reviews, annon of ocurse.

If anyone wants to know, just drop me an email at

BTW, the song Alone, I had it on a cd a friend gave me and burned it for my discman so I heard it before you did lol


maynardscandy chapter 3 . 11/1/2003
HEHEHEHE, not usual, you're having your holidays! Lucky you...we did an impressive haunted house for halloween and I got loads of candy last night trick or treating nahnahnah

Oh well, I'll ttyl, work on the next chap darnit, how're chung and timmey?

AA chapter 3 . 11/1/2003
My god, its spelled Shimokawa Mikuni not the other way around! Bakasaru! ROFLMAO, I think I know WHICH Stephanie that is ::wink:: ::wink:: lol!


Send the completed chapter to me and I'll post it for ya.

Oh yeah, and greetings from canada :P

bloodyknight85 chapter 3 . 10/30/2003
'How sad... Jack's past... This is probably the worst thing that would ever happen to anyone like him... I feel sad for him. Hope he will get over it soon!'

Great! This chapter is good. You have done well, man... Keep up the good work. Hope to see you sooN!
Sorceress of Blades chapter 2 . 10/5/2003
Yeah...I agree...Yukino looks very beautiful...

"What will happen if AAron finds out that Miu's into questioning? What if the 3 guys find out Yuurei's evil plan? Will any sparks light up for Jack and Ayane?" Find out next time!"

Yeah...just had to do that by myself. My idea though!

Your story's good. I was typing a chapter of my fanfic of GK21, like that, only 2 girls and 2 guys tranfering from the Northeast Branch to the Far-East, and a few hyboles. Of course, it's going to be listed as humor. Now, if only I can get my oldest brother's help...

BTW, I like your story. I hope I see the next chapter!
Black Eagle chapter 1 . 9/29/2003
Hmmn, not bad WG. I see that you have a liking for inserting ACCs and SI into your fics (cf. your GK story). While I personally don't mind them, you need to becareful. Let your ACCs get out of hand, and overshadow the cast, and you'll be in real big trouble. Still, it seems promising.
maynardscandy chapter 2 . 9/17/2003
Excuse ME! You could've warned me that you were putting ME with YUKINO! Shee-ISH!


...Not that I'm complaining of course...


(devilish laugh)

NOw back to the maths homework...
Dumas1 chapter 2 . 9/4/2003
You stole my character! The grieving gunslinger is MINE! Now give him back!

Just kidding. Good story so far. I look forward to the rest of it. I hope to hear more from you about mine later. Intelligent (and intelligible) reviews are something every author wants.
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