|Reviews for What If|
| fluorescent lights chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
| Trinity Day chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
I never thought of Alice/Lily before, but you make it work. I especially like the line about how, otherwise, the prophecy might not mean anything to them. Just a little heartbreaking.
| livesonwisteria chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
Woah.. you're really good at writing fics like this
| temis chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
I thought that this was sweet and kind of cute, then I remembered what would eventually happen to both girls and almost started crying because now it was all beautiful and sad.
| Cheez Wizz chapter 1 . 2/13/2005
taht was so cool. i never ever considered this possibility, but the way you wrote it, it makes me believe that its actually what happened.
| Demeter Goddess of Protection chapter 1 . 8/16/2003
This is an alright fic. Some part were a little unclear and you need to expand a bit more. I can tell you meant it to be a short fic but you need to make it a little more detailed and longer.