Reviews for What If
Oliviatheolive chapter 1 . 4/29/2015
God! I've been searching for really good Alice stories and I loved this. Completely heartbreaking at the end...
Maxride268 chapter 1 . 8/12/2014


sheriff stilinski chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
Aww :(

So good.
Trinity Day chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
I never thought of Alice/Lily before, but you make it work. I especially like the line about how, otherwise, the prophecy might not mean anything to them. Just a little heartbreaking.
livesonwisteria chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
Woah.. you're really good at writing fics like this
temis chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
I thought that this was sweet and kind of cute, then I remembered what would eventually happen to both girls and almost started crying because now it was all beautiful and sad.
Cheez Wizz chapter 1 . 2/13/2005
taht was so cool. i never ever considered this possibility, but the way you wrote it, it makes me believe that its actually what happened.
Demeter Goddess of Protection chapter 1 . 8/16/2003
This is an alright fic. Some part were a little unclear and you need to expand a bit more. I can tell you meant it to be a short fic but you need to make it a little more detailed and longer.

Good Luck!