|Reviews for A Whole New World|
| Serra-Of-Many-Names chapter 3 . 7/1/2004
A miscarriage involves cramping, menstruation, blood clots or tissue in the menstrual blood, decreased breast tenderness, and lack of fetal movement/heartbeat. (Symptoms from .com.)
All I needed to do to find this was type "symptoms of miscarriage" into Google. Is that really too much effort for you?
| Gene Elimination Squad chapter 1 . 7/1/2004
Please leave your home adress here so I can hire a wrecking ball and erase all evidence of your existance. Thank you.
| Katie chapter 10 . 5/2/2004
keep on going, I like the idea of the whole world being destroyed. But, then again I would be gone because I live in Ohio and remember you sadi that only Glen Oak survived.
| hockeygirl7 chapter 10 . 4/20/2004
I don't have an idea for a sequel, but Ido think that you should keep writing because you have a talent for it! I love all of your stories! They are always interesting and always end happy.
| Team Bitter1 chapter 10 . 8/31/2003
Oh my god, what the HELL were you thinking? I've seen porn movies with better plots than this exaggerated projection of a baby fetish. Don't you have anything better to do at 13 than to obsess over pregnancy? How can you introduce the destruction of the world and then have the only survivors obsess over nothing but their reproductive systems?
And while we're on the topic - how in the world is anyone going to survive anyway with no working utilities, while constantly producing more humans to deplete the world's remaining food sources? This story is proof of why we strongly believe why stupid people (ie you) should not be allowed to reproduce.
You know, come to think of it, we think we've solved the great mystery of what killed the world's population. It must have been this story. Because we surely want to put ourselves and our fellow man out of our misery.
| catgurl83 chapter 10 . 8/31/2003
I would have liked to have seen the story go farther but oh well. All in all, it was pretty good.
| curlymonic1215 chapter 10 . 8/31/2003
Yeah! I'm glad everything turned out all right. Anyway great story and I can't wait to read more of your work
| Lucy Beaumont chapter 10 . 8/30/2003
You certainly had an interesting idea here. I thouroughly enjoyed it.
| catgurl83 chapter 9 . 8/28/2003
Mia... that's a very pretty name. That is one thing I must say for you. I love your taste in names! But since everyone was there for the last births, wouldn't they have been more eager to see Mia?
| Oreata chapter 9 . 8/28/2003
hi this is good but they need some boys
| gallileia chapter 8 . 8/27/2003
I liked your story, i thought about doing one with everyone pregnant (not Ruthie, though)I'm not a doctor either, but I thought your story was fairly accurate.
| catgurl83 chapter 8 . 8/23/2003
Pretty good chapter.
| curlymonic1215 chapter 8 . 8/23/2003
Keep up the good work. This story is wonderful. I can't wait to see how Cecilia's baby is. Updtae soon
| Kant Newton chapter 1 . 8/22/2003
I cannot think of anything scarier than a world populated by Camdens. You should have labelled this 'horror.' And yet... I must read on.
| Karen chapter 8 . 8/22/2003
very good. can't wait to read more.