|Reviews for Choices|
| cypris88 chapter 30 . 5/12/2013
Wonderful story! I liked the plot twists and your original character Nichole fit into the world so well. I like how everyone ended up happy... Except for Elizabeth's dad, he was probably pretty upset. Liz as a pirate just makes so much better sense though!
| Clever Lass chapter 30 . 2/26/2012
Greatly enjoyed this story. Good pacing, good characterizations, and a completely believable plotline. Wish this could have taken the place of Pirates 4 On Stranger Tides!
In fact, I don't even have any suggestions for improvement. And for an English teacher like me, that's really something! Thank you for sharing this.
| I 3 CAPTAIN Jack Sparrow chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
Luv this story! It's really good!
| Zenappa chapter 30 . 9/30/2011
OMIGOD this has got to be one of the best stories I've ever read. Seriously! Even though you wrote it awhile ago, I enjoy reading old ones as well as new. I'm completely obsessed with pirates as well as Sparrabeth and I absolutely love Nichole. Her character reminds me so much of a female Jack as well as one of my own characters Tiana. Your story was fantasic and I couldn't stop reading. I wish this really happened in the movies. My life would be complete. Long live Sparrabeth! Keep on writing! :)
| Rishtalak chapter 30 . 7/5/2010
This ending just made me smile. I loved this story, even when it seemed like everything was about to fall apart for our favorite characters. I'm glad that I got to read it!
| Coffeebean2009 chapter 30 . 6/26/2010
I love the story. I can't believe it took me this long to find it. Anyway you really did a great job.
| antiheld chapter 3 . 3/31/2010
did I already say, that I simply ADORE that elegant, light writing style of yours? well, i do!
I really like, that she does not just abandon will during the first 5 lines or so (which unfortunately is the case in a lot of other stories..) this is so much more believable.
You've also done a great job on your characterizations so far, i think. Lookin' forward to Jack :-)
oh and btw, I LOVED that "afternoon tea - scene", the way, you wrote about those other ladies (one has to like them!;)) and spun their seemingly random ghost-story conversation into that meaningful... well - thing. ;-)
| antiheld chapter 2 . 3/31/2010
I can't believe, i found this story only now! the pairings in your summary rather intrigued me, and the fact, that you had obviously given a lot of thought to your work (since you said, you edited a lot) looks promising... however, your writing style - from what i've seen by now - was, what completely convinced me ;-)
I realize, you have already finished this, so reviewing might be pointless, but i wanted to anyway :-)
| moregoth chapter 30 . 2/1/2010
Lizze the pirate, what a great ending! I really enjoyed your writing, your managed to capture both Jacks and Lizzes quirkiness. There was a great bittersweetness to your tale too, of the choices they all made.
| sweetness328 chapter 30 . 1/7/2010
I just came across this story yesterday and just finished reading it. What a wonderful Sparrabeth tale! It was very beautifully written. I loved your lady pirate, Nichole. :)
| xNeariax chapter 30 . 8/21/2009
WOW.. simply that. I really am at a loss of words here.. this story simply held everything: drama, humor, adventure - and of course - love. 3
Can't believe I've only discovered this NOW. I still love it, though! Huge JE shipper since seeing the first movie for the first time (only never quiet thought of seeking ff's about it XD) and your story completely reminded me why I love 'em. :)
Not to mention it was the best written multi-chapter thing I've read in ages! I definitely love your writing style (will have to take a look at what else you've written soon as possible!) and your characterization as well. So, all this said, nothing more to do then send this straight to my favs for re-reading, surely.
| JustAnotherAuthorDurping chapter 30 . 11/18/2008
Now that, my dear, was a damn lovely story. :)
To be quite honest, I was rather wary of reading this at first; I was never one for post COTBP fics because authors can never seem to capture the characters just right, and I am a stickler for character. But I saw the author penname, realized I had seen you about the Sparrabeth communities, and complied.
And boy, am I happy I did.
This story was just lovely in every aspect of the word; you actually kept all the characters in character, and particularly Will, whom people seem to have the most difficult time with (most likely because he has the personality of a piece of cardboard). The interaction between Jack and Elizabeth was just astounding; intimate and gentle one moment, teasing and playful the next, and then heated and lustful. It was nice to see a rainbow of their emotions. :)
You're way of writing flows very smoothly, and the fact that you actually went my historical facts and what not made this story even more charming.
Overall, this is one of the best chapter fics I have read in a VERY long time. I applaud you Erinya, and I applaud this fic too. Bravo my friend. :3 It was a great adventure indeed.
| momozora chapter 30 . 9/18/2008
Random thing though, I dunno if it's just me, but sometimes I got mixed up with what tense you were using. You used present tense a lot like "He does blah blah" but then every now and then it's like past tense and I was like okay..I dunno. I mean, I know there are times when the characters think of the past, but I mean other times. Either way, awesome!
| momozora chapter 30 . 9/18/2008
That was AWESOME! I read it in like...2 days? lol. With school haha. And I STILL managed to do my homework. Seriously though, you write awesomely. .
PS. That was awesome.
| BlondBond chapter 30 . 6/2/2008
One of the very first Sparrabeth stories i've read on Fanfiction. And my favourite one,still (though I prefered the first version of the tale, you've change some plot, don't you?). Jack and Elizabeth forever!, what else can I say? they did not end up together in the movie (yeah, we all know-this is Disney, and Will whas the best and only one). Still, I believe there exists some alternative place beyond this world, when Sparrow and Swann sail together forever (sorry, too much Marquez stuff:) Many greetings, I salute You!