Reviews for First Christmas
Leia Skywalker chapter 1 . 1/26/2002
Hello. I just went back through my reviews and realized that I hadn't reviewed you back like I had promised. I'm sorry!

Anyway, I really enjoyed reading your're a great writer! This story is amazing!

Try putting the conversations on separate lines with a blank line inbetween.
techie2007 chapter 1 . 7/11/2001
i like it! I love the M/L stuff. ttfn. P.S. Make it longer
Dreamer in the light chapter 1 . 2/14/2001
Aww. How sweet.
sassafraz chapter 1 . 12/24/2000
The story line is good, however it needs a little work in regards to sentence structure and punctuation. And perhaps you can do something about the formatting. :)
Heather chapter 1 . 12/23/2000
Sweet, entertaining, and well-written all in one. Keep up the great work.
Slink chapter 1 . 12/22/2000
Oh how sweet! (I'm on a roll with reviews today) Write more. I always like the ones about holidays (like the Thanksgiving one).
Sarge chapter 1 . 12/22/2000
Other then the formatting which is all clumped together, this is a areally sweet story. It's also very well written. Good Job!
Day Star chapter 1 . 12/21/2000
Thas was so sweet. Very romantic
Tracy Winston chapter 1 . 12/21/2000
Hey, really good! Keep up the great work!
laura chapter 1 . 12/21/2000
i like it
Teris Xenite chapter 1 . 12/21/2000
You go girlfriend! Even better the second time around!