Reviews for The Doll Army
moi chapter 1 . 3/12
oh my LORD what a plot twist!
Eryniel Alasse chapter 1 . 6/15/2016
Genius, dear author, genius. I loved this short little story so very much. :) It was the perfect blend of innocent naïveté and dark foreshadowing. It's hard to see things through a child's eyes sometimes: their perfect and uncomplicated world that they have before they grow up and experience all the ugliness and brokenness that the world has to offer. *sighs* The last scene honestly gave me chills! I'm glad that Peter still has some shreds of humanity left in him then. I never could imagine him as the ruthless sort, just the kind out to save his own skin – even then, it seems like he would save what he could, no?

Anyway, this was a FANTASTIC story, and it will definitely be going on my favorites list. :)
Bella Cullen chapter 1 . 4/5/2016
It was a sweet story
aalens chapter 1 . 12/16/2015
Your imagination and originality is wonderful.
johnlaurens chapter 1 . 2/3/2015
Oh, this is adorable! Tonks is so cute as a child, and I love how she and Sirius get along. Peter was extremely well, it surprised me that he protected the house, knowing of Bellatrix's plans.
It was quite human of him, and thatsa side you don't see very often on Peter.
Lupin. I love Lupin in everything, he's the best werewolf ever, and I love him. What he did for tiny Tonks was so cute!

Overall, this story was amazing!
SlvrCat145 chapter 1 . 12/7/2014
Oh my god. I absolutely love it. Tonks is so cute here, and the way Peter protects the Tonks family (well mainly just Dora)-it seems that even though he is a death eater, he's still human. Human enough to protect the family Bella wants to kill. This story is gorgeous.
Snarky64 chapter 1 . 2/20/2014
I really enjoyed this story. Thank you.
Riot On An Empty Street chapter 1 . 1/16/2014
I loved this so much, this is such a darling story! I wished James had been tere, but at the same time, it's okay for him not being there. I love how Dora could see everything, in the precise way that adults underesrimate children. I loved Sirius love for her, it made perfect sense and I hate how that wasn't on the books. I loved the Remus you wrote, and the Peter you wrote (scared and wrong).
Ah, you are such a wonderful writer, thank you for this lovely ahort story.
little lily witch chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
Good storie, I truly enjoyed it...
the rats protection was unexpected sign of leaving leftovers of humanity...
CalliopeMused chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
It's a very, very special kind of story that gives Peter Pettigrew hints of just why he was a Gryffindor and one of James Potter's friends. Little-Nymphadora is charming, Remus is wonderful, and Sirius comes across wonderfully.
MakingMarauderMischief chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
My God, I want to cry. I could never hate Peter after that. Not so much as before. *sigh*
Thank you for the amazing story.
Amethyst Beloved chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
Hi Fernwithy,

I'm warming myself before I jump into your Shifts-verse. You mentioned this fic in your PFW interview so I just had to re-visit it. You've really made Peter human. Sirius doesn't think much of the jokes he makes about Peter without thinking because Peter doesn't make a fuss. But DE!Peter was a favorite on the dark side so why wouldn't he like it there?

The Remus and Tonks scenes were so precious. It's cool how you can work in fluff when the age gap is more obvious than ever.

-Amethyst Beloved
baby Cyclopes chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
Dr. Pepper 87 chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
Aww the ending was touching
Ichiume chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
I'm really bad at reviews, but this story is genius. An awesome blend between childish(?) innocence and a dark overshadowing. I love how the adults try to protect their children as much as they can. It's so realistic. Thank you for sharing this story with us.
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