I definitely agree with your author's note about how Jack manipulates people. Poor Norrington is in way over his head.

Oh, poor Norrington. It's hilarious, but I feel sorry for him, not that that keeps me from laughing hysterically.

I'm liking this very much so far.

Oh, wow. Excellent chapter. I'm eager to see what Jack's up to. If I were Norrington, I'd be panicking right about now.

What an interesting story. I have read the entire thing on this very day and must say I'm impressed. You have managed to completly change Norrington with hardly any effort and mannaged to do so in one story. Hats off to you. I await more great chapters from you for the great read.

-Sydney

hehe great chapter. made me laugh, how pissed norrington is getting. i can just see the look on jack's face, cuz he'd love it.

~ep41

Well, this should be interesting!

Thanks for updating!

Beautiful chapter as always. One thing though- Norrington is English so they'd be trousers not pants.

like the jack/norrington dynamic -was wondering, how about norrington/ana? (it really came from chap. 16, when she's bandaging his arm)

Hullo Emma ~

Ops, I'm behind in reading, aren't I? I seem to have missed updates here ... Anywho, I dare say you are doing well, here! :-) Norrington's visit to Tortuga was funny and sobering at once, black humor at its best, it seems, and this chapter is setting us up for some *more* very interesting doings, I can tell! Do carry on - I can't imagine what comes next but I'd love to know, soonest! :-)

Cheers ~

Erin

Nothing wrong with talkie chapters, they develop and advance plot, which you have certainly done. Can't wait to see whats implied to be happening next!

OH REALLY COOL!

Still here .. still reading.. still enjoying!

Great chappy.. Is Jack going to get caught? Is Norri really NOT going to lift a finger to help the man he has actually come to call friend? hm... *taps chin*

Oh.. I give up! UPDATE SOON!

"“Leave this – the open ocean, the ship…” he snorted and added “…Tortuga…”" tru that. simple answer.. ye can't leave it, mate

"It’s possible to have fun without living in complete lawlessness, you know.”" like norrington would know, he's such a tight-ass at times no matter how great a character he is

"“One always says pants in the plural,” he remarked, fingering his pants’ ruined remains. “But now these have only got one leg. See?” he added when she didn’t comment. “The other is behind you.”" holy fork! i was having a most deep and philosophical convo with someone the other day on how if you sliced one leg off a pair of pants, would it become a pant? most intriguing.

"Aha. Satan had left the room." lol. satan has left the building...

whe! very nice chapter. please update!

~ep41

Excellent as always. Thank you for updating so frequently, i really appriciate it _

hello? what about the other person, from the ship, who was supposed to show up in this chapter? i really want to find out what happened to him.