|Reviews for The Curse of the White Sword|
| Reader1 chapter 13 . 6/22/2016
That was an amazing story. Great job!
| Stormcutter684 chapter 13 . 6/8/2015
Yes! Thank you so much for finishing this story. I very much want to scream when I stumble across a great fanfic ... Without a happy ending. Or rather, ANY ending at all.
I really loved this. It's really unique and creative, with plenty of evil plot twists. I mean, so much love drama at the beginning, and then Will leaving ... Elizabeth following.
And I was wondering about the prologue and how it was related to your whole story here, but it ties in nicely.
And then the whole myth about the White Sword and Copperhead, it was all so interesting and intriguing!
Yeah. I must be stupid - try as I might, I could not guess who 'Atticus Willem' (hope I said that right) truly was. But alas - it was good ol Bootstrap! HOW did I not see that coming?
And then I thought it was all over, but then that nasty tsunami or tidal wave came in, involving that lummox Gillette in stealing the White Sword.
I really did enjoy this. Great job, mate! Loved it.
| Guest chapter 13 . 8/2/2014
Quite entertaining! My first fan read and throughly enjoyed it! Pirates may not be as prevelant now but we still sail the sea and enjoys what she offers... Treasures if all kinda!
Happy sailing... Wind at your back and all
| ArgentNoelle chapter 13 . 2/18/2013
Beautiful. And in the end, you're not sure what was true and what was just a story...
| Marcus S. Lazarus chapter 13 . 1/7/2012
Even with the knowledge of what ‘really’ happened in the series, this was still a highly engaging bit of work, I assure you.
The opening scene raised some interesting questions about how it would tie in to the central plot, and the question of what would happen to Port Royal created an engaging question for the reader to learn the answer to as the plot unfolded, particularly with the introduction of the white sword and its connection to someone whose mere presence had such a devastating impact on Will and Elizabeth’s relationship.
Subsequent developments as Will misinterpreted the situation with Hamilton might have seemed slightly forced- I’d think that fighting the cursed undead and his current reputation as a blacksmith would give Will more self-confidence than that-, but the results were definitely intriguing as a new supernatural angle was introduced to Will’s life in the form of that strange attack while Elizabeth resorts to increasingly desperate measures in her search for answers (Nice analysis of the life she’s forced to live on Tortuga, BTW).
Still, Jack’s reunion with Will and Elizabeth certainly worked well, and the reasoning behind the White Sword being cursed was certainly an intriguing addition to the ‘rules’ of piracy- although I would have thought that the amount of detail that apparently went into the sword would have also played some part-, with Copperhead making an intriguing addition to the cast of ‘PotC’ pirates even before you definitively introduced Bootstrap Bill and Barbosa into the equation.
A part of me still wishes that Barbossa and Copperhead had lasted a bit longer before they died- it feels like they didn’t really have time to establish themselves as a credible threat before they were taken out of the equation-, but the confrontation between them and the heroes was still fairly effective, and you definitely described the sword-induced earthquake and the aftermath very well.
Plus, of course, the epilogue was definitely effective; I actually preferred your ceremony to the one included in the movie- dramatic it might have been, but I just don’t like Barbossa-, and the implication that their daughter joined the “Black Pearl”’s crew is certainly an effective way to bring their families and legacies together...
Keep up the great work!
| Hausmannn chapter 13 . 10/3/2011
Great job! I wish I could write like you! Excellent!
| DragonLady chapter 13 . 8/4/2010
this story was amazing... you're a really talented writer... I really envy you.. I wish I could write like that...
But nonetheless thank you for writing this and you're other stories!
| Lilly Emerald chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
this was really excellent story!
| XxXTateisLoveXxX chapter 3 . 6/17/2008
no D; will dont leave her
| Captain Alice Hook chapter 13 . 2/15/2008
this was an excellant and well written story! though it is usually not the kind i read, i found it an exception as i was swept away with the suspense of what would happen next and hope that all would end well. the only question would be whatever happened with Dr. Cade and the White sword, was the white sword ever retrieved from the street? or was it left in the sea as the treasure that brought the town's destuction. and also, if the white sword was retrieved, what damage did the sea do to reclaim what was hers again?
| lady angst chapter 13 . 2/11/2008
That was lovely! I rather think I like your story more than Dead Man's Chest and At World's End. O well, such is life.
Anyway, once again your incredible talent has forced ;) me to procrastinate, so I've got to go do my huge load of homwork.
Thank you for writing!
| philosophercat chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
I really enjoyed the first chapter. You've done some nice character work here, and I like how the plot is unfolding so far. It's really nice to read a quality POTC fic. :)
| Veronica Rich the First chapter 13 . 1/5/2008
It is very late in the morning but I couldn't go to bed until I finished reading this entire story. Pardon my German, but this is fucking FANTASTIC. It may be the best POTC story I've read, and it's certainly better than 90 percent of the two sequels that were actually filmed (the other 10 percent being the preservation of the character of Will Turner, of course *G*). I am a great Will fan, and you have done him and all the other characters we love great justice with this story. Brava!
| mary-emy chapter 13 . 12/15/2007
hy!I read el your stories about lotr and I must say I'm also a fan of legolas and potc!I absolutly love how you write,and I loved all the stories,although I must confess I cried a lot when you killed legolas:((...anyway,I think you should write a sequel to "The curse of the white sword" to say what happened to the turners and the norringtons after yhis of course what happend to Captain jack sparrow and his precious Black Pearl!bye!
| andrew chapter 13 . 9/1/2007
NEATO! I love it! So well written! Bravo, or brava!