Reviews for When Love's Not Enough
Hannibal3125 chapter 3 . 5/15/2009
Interesting...

Unrelsolved issues that could be addressed:

1) Why the Borg would do this (besides a convenient plot device) As Seven has pointed out, the Borg do not gestate, they assimilate.

2) How the Doctor and Seven resolved everything. I love the pairing. Unfortunately, your story goes straight from their relationship on the rocks, complete with "agreement to disagree", to them all snug and married four years later. The readers need to see how they got there, at least in snapshots progressing toward that endpoint. Otherwise, we are left wondering how everything was resolved. Besides, the match-up of Harry and Susan would be nice to see grow as well.

In summary, decent story, but it needs a bit of work.
Writer's Grove chapter 3 . 3/25/2008
I really liked this. Besides the ending seeming abrupt, everything was done well.
RingWarriorAzec2113 chapter 3 . 2/1/2007
This so sweet!

I loved it
addrianna818 chapter 3 . 1/13/2007
Nice story! Love it!
Mily chapter 3 . 4/29/2004
AWW! You DID write a sequel! Yay for you, _ This one was good, I hope you write another!
NPSweetPea chapter 3 . 8/21/2003
Very good fic. I'm glad it all worked out in the end.;) Please, keep writing more Doctor/Seven fics, cuz you're awesome!
DarkShadow1 chapter 3 . 8/20/2003
Very well done i enjoyed it
Westt chapter 2 . 8/17/2003
Ahh! You have to update SOON!
Annika Taylor chapter 2 . 8/17/2003
ACK! That cliffhanger! Add soon!
DarkShadow1 chapter 1 . 8/16/2003
oh is there another part? i love doctor and seven stories!
Annika Taylor chapter 1 . 8/16/2003
Great Story so far! I hope youy add more soon.