Where is Hedwig? Did they off his owl or something? Or did they just let her go? Or did you not write her in the script?

I like the premise, but I doubt, in real life, someone with 6 years of torture under their belt would forgive those who caused it. Six years would be enough for anyone to be insane enough to kill even their father's bestfriends.

Also— in the first chapter, I believe— you said something 'bout Harry and Ginerva romance. I despise the fact that you might actually be considering pairing him with someone who believed him a serial killer

I want to read this, but can't if he's gonna forgive them.

You have immense potential as a writer. But a lot of pieces of this story weren't realistic, and I enjoyed the first bit but now I'm thoroughly, extremely disappointed. I'm not flaming you, this is honest criticism.

Please don't tell me I wasted my entire morning reading this only to find out Harry forgives them for what they did. If he forgives them, I'm never coming back here. Harry was sent to Azkaban, a prison where the chances of you going insane are 99.9%. He had to deal with visions of watching others be tortured and killed, probably many others as well, for SIX years, while dealing with DEMENTORS and reliving the death of his parents for SIX YEARS, thinking about his friends for SIX YEARS, all because they didn't even look for proper evidence and didn't even trust him when we all know Harry would've tried his best to prove their innocence if they were to go to Azkaban. I'm praying that he doesn't forgive them and that this review was written in vain.

Thank you for a most enjoyable story.
The only point that I would pick with you is that you talk about 'racism' and 'discrimination' with regard to the werewolf. Since he was sufficiently irresponsible in HP Book 3, to forget his potion and attack students, I would consider it quite justifiable to never trust him again. That is not discrimination, that is sense. (:D So okay, all pretend, it doesn't really matter, after all.)
Well written and entertaining.

What a great read! I love how the ending gave all those involved a nice, secure, and happy place to be. Great job!

Where's Hedwig? Plot fail?

No, darling, the chapter did not "get long again" - you're just used to posting too-short chapters so when a regular-sized chapter magically appears, you think it's long.

Harry must not know that Dobby can pop people

Annnnnd noody thought to, Idk, have Dobby bring in Poppy or take Harry to Mungos or Poppy or...?

Remus and Sirius are conceited, arrogant, utterly selfish little brats who don't give a single fuck what Harry wants - they just want him to "forgive" them so that they can continue on their merry little mentally deficient way.

And I can't believe you stuck Ron in Hermione's vagina. How disgusting is that!

Why forgive people who who are proven to be fickle and betrayers? Why is it not an option to just make new friends? Why does he have to be lonely just because he doesn’t forgive the assholes? Stupid writing. Cut the poisonous people out of your life and find better friends. I’m out. I hate all this retarded forgiveness bullshit. Some things are unforgivable. Morons.

The part with the modifying of the statue was beautiful. Lovely. Nearly made me cry. great work.

This is ridiculously good. I love it. The humor, the kinda dark aura harry resonates along with his kind heart. Its brilliant. The writing is brilliant along with the plot