Amazing!

Fantastic story! I love the new and original ideas you had with are fantastic, and leaving the experience of Azkaban as a mystery almost as much to the readers as the characters is extraordinarily done.

i didn't get to finish my last review, but i was saying that the castle harry finds is kind of ridiculous. the history is not at all interesting the way it's explained, despite how it should be for being an abandoned castle for over a thousand years. the whole fic you're like where did he even get this and then at the end finding out some random spirits that are never mentioned or eluded to before hand told him what it was feels completely ridiculous. also, the sword fighting ghost is never relevant again after harrys spar with him, which is true for a lot of elements that show up. like Hedwig. she's never mentioned before she returns, or after she does and she and harry gave their little reunion. neither is hagrid. it almost makes including those elements in the story completely unnecessary because they add absolutely nothing. also, harry continually getting knocked out or falling asleep for weeks is absolutely ridiculously farfetched and kind of a cop out to pass time so it makes it seem less like instant forgiveness in the end when harry forgives everyone, which fails because it still does since the whole story doesn't really successfully flow well at all. anyway tl:dr, this fic could've been so much more than it is and it just really missed the mark.

this fic was completely not serious, for all that the subject matter was about. you have a former prisoner who didn't 6 years in a torturous prison who barely shows effects and signs of it due to some magically magical forces that only get mentioned in the second to last chapter as a half-hearted wrap-up. when the order realizes he's innocent, instead of getting him out and taking him to a proper medical facility where someone who's certainly traumatized should go, no matter if it's 'mental rather than physical' (ex, the longbottoms). from there are, we just get a lot of events that just... don't seem fully fleshed out at all. we get draco and snape set up at possibly new, important allies to harry while he's working through his newfound freedom and they turn out to be not that important to the entire scheme of the story. the castle harry finds homely

the elf speech in this sounds more like a toddler talking that a house elf

you wrote avada kevadra instead of avada kedavra

I really enjoyed this story! I loved that you let Harry's inner Slytherin out to play. I hated what they did to him, but I understand why and it did make him into who he needed to be. I love that Hedwig came back to her Harry. I was a little worried when you kind of skimmed over what happened to her, I was afraid someone had killed her in retaliation. I actually cried when she came back. Great story, thanks for posting ;-)

I skipped to the end and found out Harry forgives everyone and becomes Headmaster. I think that sucks! This is the last chapter I will read.

What assholes! They just forced themselves on Harry! Of course, Harry is angry! I would have let them die.

Brilliant fic!

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im scared

well done!

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good job!