Nothing much to add; but I'm happy to see that at last my reviews are at last registering! Yay me for getting a result! Onwards.

Despite the story being all I had anticipated, I'm starting to feel donkey ears growing! Nevertheless I'll keep going because I'm improving my speed and typing; so my efforts are starting to be fruitful .Donkey ears waving in agreement. Onwards!

This review thingy diss becoming quite fun;so I'm going to keep on with it. I'm to my embarrassment a one finger and clumsy even with that handicap. I could never face the scorn of my peers; so I took the easy way rather than the right way as Dumbledore recommended. I am improving slightly. It only took me around twenty minutes and less mistakes. Yay me! Looking forwards to the next chapter.

Therapy time! I'm finding my lazy self enjoying my self imposed task! I think I'll be less inclined to diss other authors in the future; so all is not lost. Onwards to the longed for chapter!

Your humble penitent at your service. I really am enjoying this story; it makes what is more than likely a fruitless task personally worthwhile. I look forwards to the next chapter.

I'm still a penitent lurker, so even if this is probably a dead account I'll keep serving my sentence. Your story reached something in me so I'll keep on flogging what's probably a dead donkey. I'm enjoying the anticipation so far, so onwards!

Your filler chapter has had me look forwards to what comes next, and also ended my retirement from lurking for now. I can promise no more! But on a serious note; it really has me anticipating what's to come.

Just found this story recently. I loved it! Thank you for writing.
Btw the direction you took really held up well, test of time and "later" books (from the time you were writing) & all that. Bonus points for exceptionally well-done. ;)

I loved it. Have you ever envisaged writing a sequel?

forgiveness not likely or realistic, that kills your story right there.

LMAO I haven't and won't forgive the people who got me sent to a holding cell for 12 hours over bullshit there's no way anyone would forgive their "friends" for standing by letting them be tortured in prison for 6 years with no effort or belief that he was innocent. You could have come up with a believable premise that actually would be forgiveable. Or done a revenge story. This saccharine nonsense is hurting my teeth.

I’m hooked.

Just disappointed. It’s just a disappoint, when this could have been a good story. Very wimpy.

hmm...

Loved the last line lol