Reviews for Hit the Floor
xoxojackiexoxo chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
Beautifully written.

Amazing story.

Loved It!
DemonKittyAngel chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
Sad Malik! TT Everyone abuses him. *frowns* not like I can say anything. I'm guilty to. XD
i luv malik chapter 1 . 2/8/2006
omg that was so sad! *huggles malik*

malik: get off me!

me:*sobs* o malik-kun! *sobs more*
Jadira chapter 1 . 6/11/2005
Oh wow. I merly cried at the end of this. SO SAD! But very well written. Keep it up! I think you should add more.
Eneko chapter 1 . 3/26/2005
Wah! *Continues to cry* Mew, this is so sad. I want you to continue so I could see all this in Marik's POV. Pwease? *Cute watery puppy eyes* Wahh! *Cries* I like this, even though it made me cry...
Hiro.P chapter 1 . 11/17/2004
Wow, that was f*cking great! O.O Listened to the song all the time! I always thought that 'Hit the floor' fits them, you made it true! .
MariksMyra1614 chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
oh, nice story. i hate yami marik. especially in this story he was being a jackass...and many words i shouldn't say. but you put him in character, so good job. cya later
Sour Green Apple chapter 1 . 2/16/2004
SEQUEL! Please write a sequel, this story is TOO good to NOT have one, do you want me to write one for you? Please? I promise LOTS of reviews! PLEASE, if you don't write a sequel, I'll do one for you! (Just like, contact me for approval!)
Michelle Zhu chapter 1 . 12/3/2003
THIS IS THE BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST,BEST STORY EVER! NO ONE IS OOC 'CEPT MARIK A 'LIL BUT STILL! THAT WAS GREAT! NO ONE CAN WRITE LIKE YOU! PERFECT! PERFECT! SEQUEL! PLEASE! I'LL PAY YOU FOR IT! God that was a good story.
choco wow 3 reviews in one night chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
aw... *sniff sniff* poor malik... I LOVE MALIK ANGST! gud story! i was crying towards the end...
Nadako-Mika chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
*sobs like crazy* OMG! write a sequel or something! I feel soo sorry for Malik-san now. *cries more* *gag*..I can't breath too many tears...

Mika: *slaps bak* breath through your mouth...

Nadako: *breath breath* gah... PLEASE WRITE MORE! about...about... What Mariku does after Malik has died...Maybe.. HE'LL COMMIT SUICIDE TOO! MWUAHAHA! XD

Mika: O_O

Nadako: SUICIDE FOR ALL! MWUAHA-*choke*

Mika: You brought it on yourself hikari...

Nadako: *cough choke*
Andrea chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
*trys to swallow. can't.* O_O! Ma... whoever died! ;-;! ;-;! i am unsure about this malik marik thing. aw so sad he died! ( marik can't be the.. hikari or w/e 'caus his hair is so high... but no malik died *(... i am really happy that there was no discriptiv part that showed how he died, thats good the rest is good... its all good, yes...um i wonder... i should look for more you made, no?
Chihero chapter 1 . 8/17/2003
aw poor marik! cool fic!
penns chapter 1 . 8/17/2003
so sad...poor Malik...;~; i really like this. i hope you write more soon
Katana chapter 1 . 8/17/2003
*sniffle, sniffle* That was SO amazing! I came so close to crying... (and that's hard to do!) Wah... so sad... Poor Malik!

And poor Marik, too...

~Katana
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