Reviews for The Sixth Club
FuryouMiko chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
That... was... *awesome*.
Chikiko chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
that was a disturbingly interesting fic. i like it! quite the turn around there at the end. i'm actually gonna have to fave it. thanks for the story.
Six-string Samurai chapter 1 . 11/14/2007
haha. somehow this is the best of the short fics you've written so far.
Rose1948 chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
Awesome twist! *snickers*
oh.no.the.axe.tofu chapter 1 . 12/5/2004
Decent story, a bit rushed though. I doubt that Nabiki would give someone that kind of warning before setting the dogs on them.
Ghost chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
Neatly done, and with an interesting theme. Good twist at the end. I found myself really disliking Kiyomi, and now I realise why. (Never were a big fan of Nabiki. )

There’s room for improvement, though. For starters, you rely very heavily on dialogue to get the story moving. Work more on actually describing the scenes and what the characters are doing in greater detail.

The ending left many questions unanswered. Why would Nabiki try to blackmail herself? Why would someone in America plant multiple spy-cams all over Nerima, of all places? How did he do it, anyway? And why this fascination for Nabiki?

Still, it’s an original plot and not badly written at that. Thumb’s up for you! _~
burgerbecky chapter 1 . 8/17/2003
Nice little yarn you threw together. I liked it.