Reviews for Wide As The Ocean Is
toothchick chapter 16 . 5/6/2008
This story was very beautiful. I really loved it!
buckit chapter 16 . 4/1/2008
just found this story.

only took two nights to read.

very good. really enjoyed it.
Wander52 chapter 16 . 10/20/2007
Just found your story and read did a great job...the ending was perfect...
TickleMeMellow chapter 5 . 8/2/2007
I love this story. I love it so much that I printed it (took like sixteen pages, size 10 font lines barely spaced no margins). There is really only one thing that bothers me, and it gets me every single time I read the story.

Sixth paragraph down, last line

"they’d just silently accepted that the other one was there"

should be "they'd each just silently accepted that the other one was there"

With only "they'd" they were both accepting one fact, and the other 'one' cannot be specified. Since it is seperate from the 'they'd' it couldn't mean that (this feels like a grammar logic puzzle). They each modifies the 'they'd' so that the rest of the line works in the singular.

I know that it's SUPER picky, but I just can't handle it any more. I deliberated for three chapters as to whether I should bother you about it. I just couldn't let it go.

Have a fantastic day!

-Lady A
jaglover6424 chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
Really Good Story
CSI-phreak chapter 16 . 6/13/2006
Simply beautiful.

I love reading your fics, they are enchanting.

Keep up the good work!
thinkxlove chapter 16 . 5/28/2006
aww that was an excellent story!
ReveredGeek4GSR chapter 16 . 5/23/2006
Amazing story... very well written... bravo! I seriously look forward to more of your work.
ScienceGeek chapter 15 . 5/22/2006
I really like how you've handled their insecurities and fears here. Their emotions are very real. They've run such a roller coaster of emotion in this story-it's been a heck of a ride. I'd like to say I enjoyed how you ended the story. But ff.n won't let me view chapter 16. Evil tyrants! :/
smrozier chapter 16 . 5/22/2006
YAY for the final installment of this story! Loved it!
JuanseyLio chapter 16 . 5/21/2006
eternally grateful if you would do a sequel... this story is truly beautiful... i want to know about children, and work and everything else...

you made this story come alive ;)

thank you...
scififreakmi chapter 16 . 5/20/2006
aw that's such a sweet ending! i'm glad i stuck on for this!
Alexys Funke chapter 6 . 5/20/2006
I like this story. It's like knock knock. Who's there? Fate.
Alexys Funke chapter 5 . 5/20/2006
Sara is sooper smartt. Sorry i had to do that. That Chapter was funny and yet deep.
Alexys Funke chapter 4 . 5/20/2006
That was good.
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