|Reviews for Ice Against My Window|
| mistrali chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
"each time the rain hits me" - that's a great turn of phrase. Darra is chillingly in-character here, and you've actually made me sympathise with her, a little. Despite how vile Darra was to Tris, no wonder she's on edge: I wouldn't even want to be in the same suburb as an out-of-control weather mage with no knowledge of her powers and who is hurt, neglected and angry.
| butchinthestreets chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
I like the concept, and you've presented it very nicely.
| KrisEleven chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
Very, very good. Very sad, too. I like how you portray her parents- you actually give them depth in the writing. Trisana's little blurbs were heartbreaking and well written.
| loretta537 chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
poor tris, this story even makes me feel sorry for her parents.
| alynawatlovers chapter 1 . 9/8/2006
That's soo sad. Poor Tris. I don't like her mother at all.
| Inglesa chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
wonderfull. but im not sure if it has anything to do with tamora pierce. but ok :-)
| Pandora Markku chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
that was so sad, but in this story at least her parents wanted to love her...
| Cesy chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
Very good. We need more Tris stories. :)
| Saturn's Hikari chapter 1 . 5/22/2005
I lied. I think I like this one better.
they're both too good! So different, but seeing this one really makes "the Price of Owing' all the more powerful.
| Evilstrawberry chapter 1 . 12/26/2004
Another grate fic you've written. Sad and kinda scary too.
| ho-hum chapter 1 . 11/7/2004
Darra is so cruel!
You're style of writing is enjoyable to read :)
Your charactes seem so vivid and real!
I can feel the agony Darra is facing, but I still think its unfair for Triss.. she's still a child!
| shattered amethyst chapter 1 . 10/6/2004
This was so touching, and we get a good look at /why/ Tris was sent away. I really love it. I don't know what else to say.
| Eloise Andrews chapter 1 . 6/25/2004
We don't get a chance to feel sympathy for Tris' parents in the books. We see them as Tris sees them, heartless, cruel. You've made them human. You've shown us what it must have been like, to be the mother of a daugter you don't understand, to be the father who has to choose between his wife's health and his daughter.
| Abombidal boo chapter 1 . 10/17/2003
AW! CUTE! But so sad too! I love it! I've only read the first sequal, but this is really good.
PS: Candice sent me.
| Exordium chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
Generally I don't read Emelan fics, but Kitty, this is so wonderful. Your writing is superb and descriptive. The mood is very angsty, full of desperation, which is something that I really like. The reader can feel Darra's torment, but you have written it in such a way that it is not forced or overdone. I am surprised by the way that you drew me in with such a short read. It was definitely unexpected, though it attests to your capabilities as a writer. :: smiles and nods appreciatively :: All in all, great job! This was excellent.