|Reviews for Black|
| I like angst chapter 1 . 9/7/2003
As mentioned before its a very interesting twist in story-telling. I tihnk it migt be intersting ot do it under the houses perspective, but that their wilbe certain limitations of the narrative; especailly with the what appears to be a very formal narrative the house seems inclined to. You might try splicing it up with what others think of the house. Or maybe you have some twist that doesn't require any splices. Anyway this is still pretty interesting.
| PepsiAngel chapter 1 . 8/24/2003
I'd absolutely love to hear more from the noble and most ancient House of Black. It was a bit of a surprise when I came upon that line but a marvelous one.
I do think it is a good enough narrator and it's a twist that makes it all the more interesting.
Overall, just v. wonderful. You seem to be quite the writer.