Don't you have a part two

... I love the idea, but, uh, where are the caps? The grammar? I'm sorry, but I honestly think that an author should take the time to make their work worthwhile reading. Good concept, but, it could definitely use a lot of work.

Yes I agree that Sesshomaru knows a lot of bad words. He has a right to be angry with his father.

This is good but still kind of sad and I don't like sad endings except sessh-kun part
Thank you for sharing your feelings and I really like this one

sometimes it's hard to tell who is who

SOOOO SAD TT

PHILIPPINES :D

so is sesshy the reincarnation and sessho the demon?

Are you Filipino too? 'Cause I completely understood the words you put in tegalog.

AWWWWWW SESSY-KUN DOESN'T KNOW HE'S IN LOVEY WUVEY!AND WHEN HE FINDES OUT HE PROBEBLY WON'T CONFESS

Alright, I like the idea, but if you can't even take the time to use capitalization, it's worthless. Seriously, if the author doesn't love their work enough to give it the proper love and attention that and THIRD GRADER would, it's trash. Great idea, but I'm disappointed.

Sesshomaru is SOOOOOOOOOOOOO much older then that. Inuyasha is well over 200 years old. I think Sesshomaru is over 500 years like there father was most likely...hmm over 1000 years old. :)

you know what would have been a cool ending? wellthis is what i think

when sessh thinks she is sleeping(at the end close to the bottem)

you know he says thanks. then you would make it say thank you kgome ...(blah blah bla a sentence or two ) then you would make it welcome then end it there you know like the chap. was at the end i think it was called" ease your pain?well i dont know just an idea

Damnit! this story is sooo sad and quite funny!

I think im team sesshou...