|Reviews for Musings of a Pataki|
| OpaqueChastity chapter 1 . 9/3/2003
VERY good! Helga was prtrayed very well! I love the part where she tells us to 'get the hell out'!
Write more stories!
| Golden Lunar Eclipse chapter 1 . 8/24/2003
Helga sounds like she's WAY beyond her years; like she's an adult. It's perfect. Helga IS more mature than a lot of people that age. I thought the language was harsh but just right.
This is very well written.
| AgeofAquarius chapter 1 . 8/22/2003
wow. wow wow wow wow wow wow. that's all I can say. you captured helga's character poifectly! _~
| specs-88 chapter 1 . 8/20/2003
Oh! that's so sad! great job though!
| Guinevere Sparrow chapter 1 . 8/19/2003
*sniff* Reminds me of... me...
| kim chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
That was good!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
Wow this is just what probably goes through her head...this is really really good.
| Hanakin222 chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
Loved it. Plain and Simple. You caught Helga's personality nearly perfectly. Great story.