Reviews for Unrequited
arashi wolf princess chapter 11 . 9/21/2009
This story is wonderful as a whole. I could never stop looking back on it ever since i found it a couple years ago. i love how all the characters are wonderful and in order. Thankd for the story that i can always fall back on to read when i have nothing left.
Liara-Shadowsong chapter 11 . 8/25/2008
Great story. A little crack-tastic, but I liked it. I think this was one of the few times I've really seen yami and hikari pairings done in a way that is both enjoyable to read and somewhat believable (semi-insane, slightly evil Ryou was a real joy to behold). It's nice to see Jounouchi and Mai finding some happiness together, too. They often end up neglected in fanfiction, so it was nice to see a story largely about them. Your version of older Mokuba was pretty awesome, too. Nice job! _
Tani Barton chapter 11 . 6/3/2007
I stumbled across this last night, and just wanted to tell you that I had a lot of fun reading it. It had just the right amount of crazy to keep things funny without making them annoying, and you really made me warm up to Mai, a character who I've always been kind of lukewarm on. Great job!
Tekitwa Dreamer chapter 11 . 12/23/2004
Tha' was amazin'ly hilarious. Got t' love 'kura. Interestin' plot, by th' way. Detailed.
Sapphire Dragons chapter 11 . 9/26/2004
*tear* IT'S OVER!

GOOD JOB!

*adds fic to favs*

Sapphire
Sapphire Dragons chapter 3 . 9/26/2004
KAIBA WAS THERE! _

heeheehee! mokie is so funny like that!

Sapphire
Sapphire Dragons chapter 1 . 9/26/2004
sapphire's mom: WOULD YOU SHUT UP? THE GIGGLING IS GETTING ANNOYING!

Sapphire: *giggles* This is so *giggle* funny! *giggle*

SMURFLE-FLURF!
Megami-Sama Nayru chapter 11 . 9/2/2004
Wallpaper-sized still eh? _ I think I know JUST what to draw for you! Hee. Mokuba's reaction to said photo shall be most enjoyable to see, ne? _ And the Mai/Jou fluff? Thank you. So much. Not many people write good Mai/Jou, so I'm glad you did the pairing some justice. Although with my current Malik obsession, I haven't had much time to look for any. Looks guilty But oh well! No more Blaze, eh? Damn. He was starting to grow on me too. Oh well. I'm sure Kaiba's enjoying him at least. And Otogi... well, if I was Mai, I wouldn't have been able to keep in the laughter. Hysterical, oh-crap-I'm-gonna-fall-over-but-I'm-still-gonna-laugh laughter. Not to mention the fangirlish squeals and the insistance of being invited to the wedding..! giggles Otogi in a weddin dress. Kawaii. But I digress. You should write another fic of this general persuasion. Maybe Yami/Yugi or something a bit more weird, like... Malik/Mokuba! _ Oh the joy. I'm gonna go now. Before I hurt myself attemtpting to add witty commentary. Later!
Tuulikki chapter 6 . 8/26/2004
Better to review before I lose this fic again... it happened once and it really wasn't easy to find this again. ; Didn't remember your name, the fic's title - I just remembered that someone had it in her favorites. *sweatdrop*

Anyways, this is (at least so far) a great story. Well, I guess I wouldn't have bothered searching for this in the other case... *grin* I really wouldn't want to stop reading here, but I just don't have any more time to read right now... *huggles Mokuba* Love that kid. Actually, I think I love every character that has been in this so far.

Wellies! That is a cute word. Thanks for teaching it to me.

"Twenty-one and calling myself 'old'. Never thought that would happen." ; Familiar feeling. Anyone who's born, say -85, are little kids. Can't be past ten years old. ...what do you mean they're 19? *blink* ...I'm old...

Have to stop now... but I'll continue reading as soon as I can.
NeonWorld chapter 11 . 8/24/2004
I get such a kick from your sense of humor. XD

I really will miss this story, and I must go check out your other fics. This has been one huge and fantastic roller coaster of fun. :P Thanks for taking the time to write this and share.

XD Good luck for later life!
Sailor Epyon chapter 11 . 8/23/2004
Aww, that was so incredibly sweet. I love it muchly. The comedic relief was to die for, so thank you so much for that. xD Hehe, Ryou and Yami Bakura are just too hilarious for words. Blaze owns, btw. Nice job! *glomps*
matchynishi chapter 11 . 8/23/2004
Yay! A happily-ever-after! Angst is all good and all, but an old fashioned happy ending does lift your spirits up rather...

I *loved*, absolutely *adored* the hysterical albino twins in the car... lol, that was just so damn funny! Great story, keep writing more ficcies!
Lethe Seraph chapter 11 . 8/23/2004
Very awesome! I'll have to look into some of your other fics now, you know. You aren't safe any more.

I just like the mental image of Bakura summoning Man-Eater Bugs from the top of a Bug .. Hey! That makes sense!

Bugs from a Bug. Ha ha. I slay myself ...

Wonderful job. I heart you.
Liviania chapter 11 . 8/23/2004
Heh. 'The Adventure of Blaze and Jou: Two Non-Related Futagos.' I can see it now.

Happy ending! Woot! ...hey, what happened to me? Did I fall off a coffee bench and die?

Livi
Flame Swordswoman chapter 11 . 8/23/2004
Wa! ::sobs::

I LOVE this story, it can't be ending !

Oh...but alas, it is.

(ALAS? O_o)

;_; ...Well, I enjoyed it very much, this is definetely one of my favorite fics ever!

Great job! I hope you get 100 reviews! _

Can't wait to see more like this from you!
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