It seems to be a very interesting story? Why don't you keep writing it?

love the story great plot with talon and everything!

WA!
you updated and I didn't see it?
I can't belive it! and this chapter is so cute!
Ranma is such a sweetie for trying to cheer Akane-chan!_ *hearing the song love is in the air and sigh*
ho. . . . . . . wait a second, you said there will be obsticals. "obsticals are for KILLING! Sampoo KILL!" c'mon what kind of obsticals can be? tee hee, let me think. . . . . .
pa-pa-palez UPDATE! *on her knees and beg with teary eyes*
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update please

it was soo good!

i just found your story and i really enjoyed it Ranma is my fav manga and this is and awsome story i hope you update really really soon cuz i want to read more much more

Learn how to write. Learn how to format.

yep yep! love it! ~*nodds head viguresly(how u spell that-V)*~

Yay! Another chapter! I got back in school (ugh) and now I have this evilly complicated schedule with a bunch of AP classes that have a lot of homework and sometimes I just need to read a good fanfic. So... poor wittle Wanma's secret is revealed... Poor Wanma...

it wsn't v. gd at the beginning, but its getting much better.

This is pretty interesting. When will you update? I want to see what goes on next. Man like I want to read the whole story! I want to know why that "tiger" got into Akane really. How Akane's and Ranma's relationship goes and you know everything! Update soon please.

tee hee. . ._ I'm really into this story coz I like it so much! you write it good and it's intresting!

I LOVED this chappy too! _

yay! first time Ranma witnessed Talon! i wonder what he would think when he'll find out _who_ is Talon. would he be scared? mad?

anyway it sure will be very intresting! Ranma was never known as the understanding type of a guy (not when it comes to this kind of things-unless he's OOC, really OOC).

will Akane forgive and forget?

i really want them to be friends again! pa-pa-paleez?

hey! say what about the others? will they be in here too? first time I really want Happosai to be in a fic. why you ask? coz I really want Akane to kick him around. . . ; ho ho ho. . .*laughs like kodachi*O_o

:p well, see you next chap!

good job on this chappy- * (_ five star again!*v*)

Update soon 'k?

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very interesting write more!

i love it! (i might have reviewed befor as firefly but now i chaged it k.-) i can't wait to see what happens next! keep up the good work!

THis is a great story! YOU MUST UPDATE SOON! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! *hehem* ok, great story, must update, i practialy fell in love with it. KEEP WRITTING! *hehem* sry, i cant controll tHE VOLUME OF MY VOICE!