|Reviews for In the Offing|
| Kitian chapter 1 . 9/19/2003
What an engaging piece. The whole fic had a very seductive, captivating appeal to it; your descriptions of Edea are bewitching, and so is the portrayal of her relationship with Seifer. I like!
| ArashiKishu1 chapter 1 . 8/22/2003
I have always been somewhat intrigued by the relationship between Seifer and Edea. In a sick twisted sort of way, I find it alluring. She is powerful and beautiful, and he's all too captivated by it.
I loved the descriptions, not to mention the characterization of Edea. Malevolent (of course), but, in a way, sympathetic, too. 'You don’t have to do this, her gaze seemed to say. There is still time.' Another wonderful piece!
| Quistis88 chapter 1 . 8/22/2003
Very very good! The type of bond you described between them was a very suitable one and you described it with excellence. Awesome work. :)
| Hokit chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
This is a very well-written and addictive story :) You've delved into the mindset of Seifer under mind-control perfectly. For that, I bow to you :)