Reviews for Broken
DemonKittyAngel chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
That so sad! TT you write sad stuff. If I have a mental breakdown I blame you. XP
amy lee not evanesences chapter 1 . 12/11/2004
plez write more
LoneDancer chapter 1 . 12/4/2004
PWEESE write a next capie i love your storys, bout the only thing that makes me cry
DragonSteel chapter 1 . 11/29/2004
...You LIKE suicide stories, don't you?

*Sniff* That was sad...


Poor Ryou... He'll probably blame himself for not being there in time.

*Blink* Can Bakura die?



Perhaps. But most likely only if he really wanted to.

If I had lived as long as him would have probably commited suicide a LONG time ago.

Why? Because you're so pathetic? If you want I coould do it for you...

If you killed me you would kill yourself as well, and as you said 'suicide is for weaklings.'

You're not a weakling, ARE you?
Bakusgal200 chapter 1 . 6/10/2004
ok if every thing wuz alright then y wuz he comitting suiside it wuz exelent but i still don't get that part OH and WIRTE MORE TO KILL ME PLEASE IM GOING CRAZY!
Digital Diary chapter 1 . 3/29/2004
Darn. ;_; That ending makes me want ta cry... Bakura smiles up till the very end... Berry good ficcy though!
stargirl3000 chapter 1 . 9/23/2003
aw, no...
Celestial Assassin chapter 1 . 8/28/2003
oh man, I can think of a million different sequel things I could write! AHH! *dies* Anyways, this is very good. I luf your writing style. I've read some of your other stuff and it's all really good.
TokyoGal90 chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
I like how you ended it. Keep up the good work!
Katia-chan chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
damn you! damn you to hel! you are so evil! that is a horrible and cruel ending...good story, but mean ending!


shadowheart378 chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
its ok...but it should have a sequel