Reviews for The Protection of the Royal Navy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have enjoyed this fic up until now - and hope that you will eventually finish the story. Though I realise that it looks dubious when taking into account the date that you last posted! Anyway, just wanted to say that I have enjoyed the fic so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great tale so far! I love it... I love the Jack/Ana and I love the Will/Liz... and I absolutely love the Norrington theme. The three top things I love in a well-crafted POTC story! I see it's been a while since your last update... that's sad... but I understand it. I have *ahem* a few of them myself, so I really can't judge. LOL! Anyways, I hope someday there will be an updated to this, because I will certainly be looking forward to it! Thanks for an engaging tale so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story! I love anything with Jack and Norrington in it. Not SLASH though! It just makes good story. Keep it up. Post soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() A bit curious as to why this hasn't been updated in 6 months. Quite literally brilliant! Please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! I hope you update soon. I especially love the first Will/Elizabeth scene...*winks* Hope to get more of that! |
![]() ![]() I hope your family and friends are doing better. Thank you for sharing your story - this is a very well written and carefully scripted story (the only quibble I have is in an earlier chapter - Captain Jack seems to me to be a mite short to successfully pin Commodore James while throttling him. But I like your characterizations - I hope you are able to continue your story. Thanks again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I especially enjoyed your finding a story line that lets Norrington collaborate with Sparrow, without requiring him to unstarch at all. And sending the Turners to Tortuga-so _practical_! The dynamics of Anamaria and Sparrow, too, are as convincing as any I've seen. Keep doing your homework, but by all means WRITE US THE REST! |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool story! more soon please |
![]() ![]() I really like your story and I can't wait for the next chapter to come up |
![]() ![]() Please write more! Your story is wonderful, a very entertaining dialog, suspenseful and exciting plotline, and Norrinton is perfectly in character! Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() Are you ever going to update this i want to know what happened. and really it doesn't rain in Manchester all the time. It can be really nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, nice story. Wonder how you're going to get them out of this one though. I hope you update soon LM |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice. I particularly like the Turners moving since I don't imagine that Port Royal would be very comfortable for them. I also like that you've managed to come up with a farily unique idea (no easy thing any more with so many POTC stories out here!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am very glad you are finally continuing this excellent story. I love the way you write Jack, and his relationship with Anamaria. Good work. Hoping to read more soon! ~~Geek Mama~~ |