Reviews for Chibies!
Damocles chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
Not bad, not bad.

Needs more background info though.

Who is Shikon? where does she come from?

We need to know this in order to better understand

why she does thing like she does. like making chibi potions...
RingoSama89 chapter 16 . 9/25/2003
Me:np, Chibi-Shikon!

CShikon:okay.

Me:i'll email ur , how did u get born if no dad exists?

CShikon:(slaps me if she could reach)HENTAI('pervert' in Japanese)!

Me:OW!(big red hand mark appears)and...i...dun..really...know..da..dude from...da... friend...showed...me..a..manga..of.. , count me out..of saying..he's hot, cuz..i..dun..hav..dat side.(faints)

(Chibi-Shikon giggles)_
RingoSama89 chapter 15 . 9/25/2003
Me:HAI peoples! happened 2 da font now?

Shikon:Let's just say they changed it all.

Me:k...hey, i think kagome should wear those clothes from Tomb Raider anyway.O NO!she'll look like a slut!

Shikon:o well, i guess dat's da way it is.

Me:Hai('yes' in Japanese).
lindygirl chapter 16 . 9/24/2003
0_0 ~_~ 0_0...o-kay.

If you're stuck just have a fluff chapter between Inu and Kag. Have them wake up first and the pills take effect. Pure fluff is good for the readers and it will give you more time to work on Sango and Miroku. That's the best I can do (now you see why I'm not a writer) _'.

See ya!

.byebye!
Death chapter 16 . 9/24/2003
I like your fic!I'm not exactly how you think or somebody else thinks as in a devil or grim reeper.

No I'm nothing like that!I'm actually everything the opposite!

Name:Death

Profile:A dark haired girl,with a spiral eyebrow under the right eye,the darkest grey eyes you've ever seen,a black tanktop,black pants with a skull belt.

Job:Divider of life and death.

Fav. stuff:Roses,stuffed animals,having the bitter taste of mortal life.
Luke the warrior chapter 1 . 9/24/2003
hm cool
the SeVeReD-HaNd chapter 16 . 9/24/2003
Cool ...I say that,like,every chapter,don't I?Whatever...Hey,I got an idea...Maybe Kohaku could meet Sango when shes a chibi.I dunno...and.. Souta somehow magically appears and falls in love with Sango!..and...o!...Inuyasha catches a cold!people gice strange looks shrugs I think it would be cute...So...Ja.
Lady Procrastinate chapter 15 . 9/23/2003
Good chapie, update soon!
lindygirl chapter 14 . 9/21/2003
A Lora Croft look would be cool for Kag. As long as it's an Inu/Kag fic I'll read it_. I'm not that picky_.

Good fic!

.byebye!
the SeVeReD-HaNd chapter 14 . 9/21/2003
Hurray!

You updated!

ahem...nice chapter...Inuyasha was...(oh,how to say it?)...totally ,hey,it's your fic,and I do not like to ...

YOU JUST REMINDED ME OF THAT EPISODE! WAH...bursts into tears and runs crying down the corridors,much to the confusion of the inhabitants of the castle.

Servent:Umm...whats with her?

Servents wife: whispering Inuyasha chose Kikyou

the-SeVeReD-HaNd:WAAH! Why did you have to say it out loud,servents wife?

Servent:She needs a life...

the-SeVeReD-HaNd:What? Inuyasha is my life! You can die,servent!pushes a button and the servent falls through a trap door into a pit

servent looks around until he spots his doom

servent:OH NO! ANYTHING BUT THAT! NO!

Richard simmons:Come on now! 1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2! Do those jumping jacks!

Servent:AH!
Lady Procrastinate chapter 14 . 9/21/2003
I have to agree with the Inuyasha/Kagome worshipers! IS THAT WHAT YOU CALL A KISS? Update soon! Ja ne!
RingoSama89 chapter 14 . 9/20/2003
Chibi-Shikon:i am very sorry!

Me:gr...

Chibi-Shikon:Well?

Me:as long as Inuyasha and Kagome kissed, then it's ok!_

Chibi-Shikon:Whew!how bout mai mommy's Lora Croft's Tomb Raider story?

Me:hm, sounds cool!

Chibi-Shikon:YAY!MOMMY!Sesshomaruwuzhere said yes!

Me:Chibi-Shikon, call me Jenny.

Chibi-Shikon:o, dat's ur name?k!

Jenny:i'm da same age as Shiken.

Chibi-Shikon:cool.

Jenny:Yep.
the SeVeReD-HaNd chapter 1 . 9/19/2003
Please,I beg you,Shikon-sama,update! You have the complete support of Lady-SeVeReD-HaNd and her minions,I will even assist in the funding(camera dudes gotta eat too) JUST PLEASE UPDATE!

Ahem...
RingoSama89 chapter 13 . 9/17/2003
ur name is Shana?i know dis 8th grader named Shana in mai middle skool, but i ain't in middle skool , in other words, imma a scrubby in high skool!yay!sho people online, SCRUB ME!

Chibi-Shikon and Chibi-Shiken:SCRUB!(points finger me)

Me:-_-well, i am a scrub dis year, but i'm 13 now cuz i wuz born on September 30, 1989 midnight. least i'll b 14 on da last day of , i'll b an official scrub on dat day.

Chibi-Shikon:o well, 2 tell u in advance, SCRUBBY WUBBY!

Everyone hoo reviewed dis story:SCRUB!

Me:o gr8...
Lady Procrastinate chapter 13 . 9/17/2003
Yay! Me is going to go to Inuyasha's relm/world rite now! Update soon!
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