Reviews for Rebellion Against Fate
Demented Insane Spirit chapter 5 . 1/28/2013
:( I'm sad that this story isn't complete. It's such a wonderful story and I love the relationship between Wink and Lloyd, it's perfect. Sighhhh.
The Low Brass Dude chapter 5 . 12/10/2011
I love this, please please please please please continue!
FrostedDiamond chapter 5 . 2/22/2011
great story. its getting better and better. please update soon
semi-charmed kinda life chapter 5 . 4/17/2006
THis is an awesome story, you are a great writer and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Up-date soon please!
Vampiric Zekushion chapter 5 . 3/26/2006
Good Story I wanna read more
Sultan O' Spin chapter 5 . 7/29/2004
Sorry I missed your choices for the DD when I was reviewing. If it were up to me, I definetly revive Rose before Lenus. Thats just me though. I love what you're doing with Lloyd's character. I never really liked Lloyd before this story, mostly because it was a poor name for a villian or a rival. But in this story he's great.
Sultan O' Spin chapter 3 . 7/29/2004
Ok, I don't want to piss you off, because I do really like this story- but in the game, Lloyd never mastered the Divine Dragoon Spirit. It never glowed in his hand when he claimed it. (winces and puts his hands up) Dont hurt me. If you meant for Lloyd to have the dragoon, thats one thing, but it seemed to me as I was reading this that was not the case. But it is good, and i am enjoying it. I agree with your decision to not make Wink a dragoon, especially a dark dragoon. I'm looking forward to who you pick for that role.
Virtue chapter 5 . 6/20/2004
This is really good so far! Please update soon. Can't wait to see how this turns out. (Albert n Emille are the best!) xD
Parallel-Blue13115 chapter 5 . 1/15/2004
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There's no next chapter...
...Why? I am crestfallen...deeply saddened...moved to tears...
Seeing your author note, anticipation running wild...It's too much for my feeble mind to handle. Please...update soon. :(
::sniffle::
Parallel-Blue13115 chapter 4 . 1/15/2004
Lol Miranda's agitated. Awesome.
This is great so far. I can tell you're planning something big, and you're preparing for it quite well. Good job!
Parallel-Blue13115 chapter 3 . 1/15/2004
KAWAII! _ Ah LLoyd's alive. Ya know, actually if you brought Lenus back, it might do good for the love plotline. I'm not talking so much as a love triangle (Cursed FF VII, but I personally liked Zack and Aeris better...sorry I'm rambling) but like...something that would stifle the relationship between LLoyd and Wink temporarily. Or...something like that. ::grin::
Parallel-Blue13115 chapter 2 . 1/15/2004
Didn't believe me before that I'd review every chapter? _
I agree with your theory, so the chapter isn't THAT stretched. It's actually pretty logical and it's a POSSIBILITY on how LLoyd could've survived.
Parallel-Blue13115 chapter 1 . 1/15/2004
It may not be much, but I am going to review every chapter. Why? BECAUSE I WANT YOU TO WRITE MORE! People who aren't reviewing this suck. Your writing is wonderful. This first chapter alone is so touching. And not many stories are able to do that to me.
Story Weaver1 chapter 1 . 9/6/2003
Very well written. I can't wait to read the rest.
Sors chapter 5 . 8/29/2003
. Yay! Happy Al and Emille chapter! Hm... You might want to add some more shock into this, it seems to be lacking in that. I like the fact that Shana is tagging along, i've become a fan of her's! .
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