|Reviews for Black and White|
| Sadako Kurosawa chapter 15 . 12/15/2003
I ADORE this story.
I feel so bad for Zax... He's my second favorite character in the game... *sob* POOR ZAX!
Anyway... I hope you continue. This story's far too good for it to be abandoned...
Well... All I have left to say is...
This is going to go on my favorite stories list. :)
| AerithReborn chapter 15 . 10/25/2003
Wow. Interesting storyline structure, linear, but scattered. The characters are disturbing (poor Zack) and real, even if they are somewhat... different... from the original characters. AU apparently, even if the pre-game parts fit nicely with the original story. I'm interested in some possible fanart (contact me if you're interested, character designs and scenes requested else I'll just try my best with what's already written). I look forward to the rest of the story.
| Euthanasia chapter 14 . 10/25/2003
Interesting story, but I can't help but notice that the premisis is very similar to Madam Hydra's story " Conflicts of Interest".
In any case, I'm enjoying it so far but the constant jumping back and forth through the plot is kind of disorienting.
| Firefly99 chapter 13 . 9/30/2003
Equally dark...equally scary...I don't think I'll ever sllep again now I've discovered this fanfic.
Not that I don't like it.
| CackleRubblePop chapter 12 . 9/17/2003
Not Tifa! *cries*
| dia3 chapter 12 . 9/16/2003
keep the chapters coming!
| Orochi Shinji X chapter 12 . 9/15/2003
And the plot thickens, intresting idea. I wonder what's going to happan next.
| CackleRubblePop chapter 8 . 9/9/2003
I like this story, but what the hell is with you and the words 'angel' and 'demon'? I mean... I dunno... I'm not a good writer by any means, but great grape, man!
I actually read this on the site... so maybe you changed it in 9 and 10...
| Firefly99 chapter 10 . 9/9/2003
Oh. Very dark.
I feel kinda sorry for Zack anyway - poor Cloud stealing his life...You know, i don't know who I feel most sorry for.
You changed that into something really twisted. Cloud is a cold-blooded murderer, Zack is Adam...
It seriously scared me. I was literally trembling as I read this. Really. I was so, so scared!
Wonderful, extreme, dark angst-horror... I doubt I'll sleep tonight...
| dia3 chapter 9 . 9/7/2003
i really like this story and hope you update, but just to let u know, chapter 8 and 9 are the same thing, so u might wanna change that...
| Psycofoxx chapter 1 . 8/27/2003
Very neat. Interesting take on events too.
| Daisaku chapter 1 . 8/27/2003
o_o very nice... VERY AWESOME. ;_;
I can't help but feel sorry for Zack.. But thats the whole point, isnt it? XD; very awesome. keep up the good work
| wild Pennyroyal chapter 1 . 8/27/2003
To be honest, I wasn't quite sure as to whether I should review this, as the storyline, well, unnerved me, to say the least. However, I realised straight away, that you deserve praise.
Your writing style is superior to many that I have seen, and, once again to be honest, I love it. The way that you use descriptions,the way you twist the words into beautiful images, and portray the characters. Hats off.
And I must admit, the reason that I was unnerved was because of the plot: Cloud, the hero, in reality nothing more than a wimpering, traitorous, wreck? It shook me up, and what I thought of him, and yet it is an incredibly unique and interesting plot. But I have to admit that this story has encaptured me, and that, that is the mark of a true writer.
(Er...sorry if the review was was a tad long. _)