Reviews for Nobody Knows
liv-angel chapter 1 . 12/22/2004
it's a really good start. go on withh your story.

i love the las line: nobdy knows, not even him.. i think then that leaves room to the next chapter.
Swifty1125 chapter 1 . 8/29/2003
nice start...
zara chapter 1 . 8/29/2003

i like this, it is rather short but that didnt seem to take anything away from it :-D

are you going to carry on further with this story? because it does have a lot of potential, so please do
Rae chapter 1 . 8/28/2003
Bravo! Applauds

Short and angsty is not usually my thing, but wow. Great work, keep

it up. Throws confetti
Guest chapter 1 . 8/27/2003
it would be awesome to have more of that story! so far its great, but are u planning on stoppin there?
Angel LeeAnn chapter 1 . 8/27/2003
A bit short don't you think? Anyway, I really think you have the potential to expand on this if you wanted. I would read it if you did. This was pretty good, especially the last line: "Nobody knows...not even him." I think that leaves room to continue.