|Reviews for Love? or Desire?|
| jazzy chapter 11 . 1/8/2008
BEAUTIFUL! SPECTACULAR! I LUVED IT! did i mention how i liked how the chapters kept on gettin' longer and longer? I luv luv luv love luuvvee long chappies! I also luv how aoshi read her mind- it was so perfect- it makes me wonder if i will find that special person, the one just for me, ah! anyway, nice talkin' to ya, all that jazz... anyway thanx 4 puttin' up with annoyin' jazzy- i even drive myself crazy sometimes- i'm too optimistic and talkative and downright enthusiastic- grr... i should get some negatizing vitamins! (just kiddin') anyway, *giggles* please, i hope u wrote much more... thanx 4 writing this- it's done a lot of good stuff for me... i hate all these fics with sad endings that i've been reading- luckily this isn't one of them- it's way way way way better! :D
| jazzy chapter 10 . 1/8/2008
I have several things 2 discuss-
1. Spelling erros- don't be sorry 4 them- u don't know how much better ur spelling and grammar has gotten since the first chappie! it's wonderful! This fic is to good 2 dislike 4 a few minor errors! :D
2. I HATE MISAO HOW DID SHE REFUSE HIM! WHAT THE HECK IS WRONG WITH HER? HE IS HER ONE TRUE LOVE, HER BABY, HER ONE AND ONLY! (i still luv this fic) THERE's ONE CHAPTER LEFT- SHE HAD BETTER GET HER PRIORITIES STRAIGHT (otherwise, i get aoshi- hahahahaha *evil laughter*)
anyway, I really am enjoyin' this! It's better than lemonade! :)
| jazzy chapter 9 . 1/8/2008
ooh! next chappie called 'aoshi proposal'- this good! maybe misao will start travelling with him, or maybe they will get married, or who know what! wowie zowie alakazamm! I can hardly wait to find out the final outcome! what about bad-boy-bryan? Is he gone for good? i hope so! he's kinda weird, and messed up, and wrong, and sickening, and brutal and just plain makes me sad... *sighs* anyway, I'd best finish this fic before i kill u w/ my annoying reviews... not that u'll ever read them... this fic IS kinda old (in a good way- no offense meant- just that it wuz finished a long time ago)... anyway, jazzy is mouthing off again... i'd best just shut up and get to homework... thanx! :D
| jazzy chapter 8 . 1/8/2008
Misao's got a temper, all right... If I were her i would have kicked bryan's a- never mind... let's not get into that... I'm sure misao is way stronger and smarter than i'll ever be... anyway, i like how this fic is turnin' out... it's good that misao didn't just say 'oh, yes aoshi, come and stay with me! I love u!' because that would have been corny (a-duh!) anyway, it wuz nice talkin' 2 ya. Cheerio. In a while, crocodile!
| jazzy chapter 7 . 1/8/2008
EEK! the next chapter is called bryan's revenge? that scares the heck out of me! maybe i should do homework... nah (actually, most 'scary' things, like movie that make my friends blubber don't scare me at all... maybe this will! I like being scared, unfortunately, not many stories/movies scare me...) anyway, i can't wait to see what Bryan's revenge will be! hehehe! see ya later, alligator!
| jazzy chapter 6 . 1/8/2008
OK- i didn't do my Homework... I'm a bad bad bad bad very bad leetle girly-wirly... i really should do my homework... but first i'm just gonna finish this ficcie-wiccie... a very nice ending to a short-but-sweet chapter... wouldn't aoshi be perfect if he was a pirate?... sorry, got a leetle lost there... anyway, nice little sweet kissy-wishy to end a little chappie! :D
| jazzy chapter 5 . 1/8/2008
Ah- aoshi so charismatic, so gorgous, so kind, so understanding, so icy, so hot, so perfect, so wonderful, so everything... except mine... anyway, that's enough ranting about aoshi's qualities... yes he is wonderful, but so what? anyway, this fic is gettin' better better... the suspense is building... what will Bryan do? *drumrolls* will the truth be revealed soon? *sighs* never mind, jazzy, just do ur homework... close the computer... that's right! :D
| jazzy chapter 3 . 1/8/2008
oh... scary... I hope this doesn't turn into a horror fic (a leetle bit of scariness is OK- jazzy likes 2 b scared!) anyway, I hope aoshi (my gorgous idol who is absolutely the best kodachi-user and cutest manga-character ever) will save the day... I think ur making Misao better- u know, more plucky and determined and stubborn, like Misao shouldbe! GOOD JOB! Arrg! I forgot about my Homework! :(
| jazzy chapter 2 . 1/8/2008
A teeny bit too chatty- well, i don't mean like that, I mean just too many little useless chatting, but still, that's OK- maybe misao should be a tiny bit more genki (cheerful, hyperactive, u know, the whole yadahyadahyadah...) I love genki misao fics! anyway, this is a nice start!
| jazzy chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
I like it- i really luv modern aoshi/misao fics... very refreshing and original, like a cool drink of frosty lemonade on a hot summer day! ( I love lemonade- I used to sell it with my cousin- we had this really funny song we'd sing 2 get people to come- it wuz a spaz!) anyway, this is a nice fic- some minor grammar-type errors, but who cares? I luv it... i'm glad this is a kinda-long fic! :D
| mandella-sama chapter 11 . 3/4/2007
AW I loved it. Despite the spelling errors ;) It was good
| che chapter 11 . 8/31/2005
rilly good BUT the gramer and spelling is not as good some things i could not understand but spell chek should do the truck. dont feal bad i suck at spelling to and you can problibly see that in this but i use spell chik all the time and i dose the trik.:P
| jessica chapter 11 . 1/16/2005
i loved this story hope u do more
| cyjj chapter 11 . 5/1/2004
What a cute couple... though a little out of character...good job!
| Lovely Misao chapter 11 . 4/3/2004
This story is the best i have ever read of aoshi and misao not only tht is was really sweet. it almost made me cry. can you make a prequel like wht happens after they get married. please!1 i am despearte!