Reviews for The Blaze of Blaise Zabini |
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![]() ![]() Its odd how easy it is to see that a fictions going to shit, most often in AUs its the first chapter at hogwarts when you can tell if the author actually thought about how a sustainable wizarding world would be. In this case its clear that voldemorts going to have no real opposition, and an idiotic plot device is exactly where this fiction is heading, also calling it a romance fic is... well stupid. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant. Touching. Excellent. It's much harder for me to look at Cedric's death now. As far as I'm concerned, this is new canon up to this chapter. |
![]() ![]() I apologise for not updating this story. It has been eating at the back of my head for the longest time though. I do have plans on updating it, I hate leaving things unfinished. I've run into a huge block on the road though. I forgot my password and the email I used for this account is obsolete. So I will have to make a new account and tie it into this one somehow. I've read the whole series and am underwhelmed. The fact that JKR discardingly mentions Blaise Zabini as some gorgeous tanned boy irked me, but it's an easy thing to write-around. Especially since the character is never spoken of or heard from again. Thank you for reading this story and I hope to tie this into the orginal one I wrote years ago. This is somewhat a backstory and as the story progresses, I'm definitely not going canon with this. The characters personalities, the plot, etc. I'm definitely a bit older now too ... I dunno .. for some reason I feel like that has to be a disclaimer. Hehehe. Cheers. ~ Nengski,fanfiction writer of The Blaze of Blaise Zabini |
![]() ![]() ![]() wish you had continued this story, would love to see if you have sirius die or not |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. I do hope you will continue this sometime. |
![]() ![]() I thought it was very well written, and a very good idea, but the fic was sorta ruined for me with the fact that you basically made Harry a non-entity when you made it seem like he would be a main character when this fic started, being introduced when Blaise was 8. When Harry was 8 you actually made him into an interesting character, with his own ideals, someone you could root for, now that we're at fifth, he's just as submissive, stupid, and a follower as he is in canon. I thought this was supposed to be Harry/Blaise? I can't see your Blaise going for canon!Harry at all. I think you need to keep your Harry the same person he was when he was 8, someone who wouldn't let anyone get him down, someone who would work hard and fight back. That's my opinion at least. |
![]() ![]() ![]() could be intersting...would love more detail in years 6 etc |
![]() ![]() ![]() plz prty plz update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, you're a pretty good author. (Female)Blaise is well written by you. Her relationship with Cedric is a pretty unique idea too. How's her relationship with Harry going to turn out? Will she be able to (the only one) talk to Harry about Cedric? I'm looking forward to more chapters by you. Good luck; you're really good! |
![]() ![]() First off im no good reviewing so ill just say keep writing Plz... and is there anyway i can read the old story or has it been deleted? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this story, I cried so much at Blaise's response to Cedric! I really hope you continue ... although it doesn't seem as if you have in months - still, I want to find out what will happen to Blaise! Are you waiting for the sixth book to come out, or will you continue the story your own way? Well, whatever happens, please continue! |
![]() ![]() Still waiting. I have just re read the entire story so-far again and again I find myself begging for more please update soon! |
![]() ![]() It's been 2 months. Any chance for an update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait to read more ! |
![]() ![]() I'm really enjoying the story so far and am eagerly awaiting more. The artwork in your profile is absolutely phenomenal too, and major compliments if you drew it. |