Reviews for Footprints
fantoallwritertonone chapter 10 . 6/13/2007
nice

write more

I love it
IAmOnlyMe chapter 10 . 7/13/2006
I really like this story. The way you write Dallas and Two-Bit feels very real, and although I can't see Soda kissing his best friend's girlfriend, you wrote it well.

Are you going to continue this?

: )
Noc007 chapter 10 . 6/16/2006
This was becoming quite an interesting story, pity it hasn't been updated tho :(
RoxyRoxxx chapter 9 . 1/23/2005
hoity-toity? cowboy?

omg newsies flash-back... i need to watch that movie again

awesome chapter!
Scarlett7 chapter 7 . 3/9/2004
You really have a grasp on the characters. This is a great story... really well written! I hope you keep going.
Scarlett
Xxgreekgrl88xX chapter 7 . 3/9/2004
Wow i just read ur story and its great poor soda he must feel bad because of wat evie said to him update soon i luv this story
suckers love chapter 6 . 12/25/2003
man, shes fiesty... update soon! i wanna know what happens!
Sarah chapter 6 . 12/13/2003
Great story!
MistressHolbytla chapter 6 . 12/9/2003
I love this story! It's quite good. You are a very good writer; it's interesting and descriptive, but to-the-point enough to communicated your meaning without being flowery.
I really enjoy this story, and the characterization you are developing for Brigit.
I love the way the characters are realisticly potrayed and how you stick to the language and type of dialogue they would actually use in Tulsa.
I'm wondering... when is Brigit going to start hanging with the Curtises? I love this story's development and you have made me curious, so please update as soon as possible!
P.S. This story reminds me of a story I am writing now... it has many different aspects and I don't know how this will turn out yet, but my story (that I have not posted yet) involves a little seven-year-old girl named Jessica who has been abused and is afraid of her parents finding her. She has run away and does not have a home, so the Curtises take her in, not knowing how things will turn out, and try to offer her saftey. The story involves how the Curtises open up compassion they did not think they had for this little girl and they begin to protect her from the many people who are after her. I'm hoping to put it up soon.
MaddScientist chapter 6 . 12/8/2003
not bad...have more soon
CrazeLilDreamer chapter 5 . 12/6/2003
great job! please update again asap!
*rocky*
Phlossy chapter 5 . 12/6/2003
Muy bien! (spanish for very good)! I love it.
MaddScientist chapter 4 . 9/27/2003
great chapter...was that darry srtickin up for brigit? kinda srprisng if it cuz he dont like buck n he dont go there...nayways have more soon
Ski-Ming chapter 4 . 9/27/2003
Let me get my shameless plug for my story, "Visiting," out of the way.

Anyway. I have to say that I'm liking this story a lot more than I thought I would. See, the prologue seemed a bit - how can I put this delicately - it seemed a bit *sappy*. But the thing is, your actual story is really good. A bit of grit, a bit of wit, and a character with the potential not to be a Mary-Sue (I'm sorry if that offends you; but you must know that I've got a bit of a bias toward any female original character, as they do tend to arrive in herds of annoying perfection).

Out of curiosity, when does this story take place? Johnny seems very bitter, and that would make sense if this happened shortly after his beating by the Socs. Or whatever. Maybe you could make the setting of this piece clear?

Also, there are a few technical errors (grammatical and so forth). If you could run a spell/grammar check, or just get a beta-reader to do it for you (I'd be happy to help), that would help a lot. Good writing mechanics aren't that hard to put in use and it's easier on people's eyes! ;-)

I'm sorry if it sounds like I'm trying to sink your story or something, because I'm not. Really. I think this story has good potential, so keep writing. If you need anything, don't hesitate to ask. :-)
pony's girl chapter 4 . 9/27/2003
aww she was being mean to johnny! well i hope she feels better soon! update soon and keep up the great work :D
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