|Reviews for Lip to Lip|
| jj chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
definitely one of my fav short stories can you perhaps make a sequel to this or another story were Mokuba and Jou are caught by Kiba doing "something" could be kissing or something else pretty please
| KeiMaxwell chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Ahaha, I just knew that Mokuba didn't really tell Jou everything behind his intentions. D Sweet. And I grinned like an idiot at the ending. Lol.
| RandSpyd chapter 1 . 11/6/2006
Uh, you probably weren't expecting to get another review on a story this old... my apologies!
Anyway, I loved this! It was super cute and very believable! Wonderful work!
| Fairady chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
ahahaha! run jou, run! loved this fic. it's hilarious and cute. thanks for posting it.
| knowyourmushrooms chapter 1 . 12/26/2004
that was wonderful Joey ur in trouble hahaha
| fluffnight chapter 1 . 12/24/2004
I got refered to your story by my friend, and "DAMN" am I glad! I love Jou/Mokuba! This story was so...(can't think of word)...ya, just leave the word. There is nothing that I can suggest you could do better (in the good way, I mean...meaning it's absolutly perfect!) Other than what I've said above *points up* I hope to read more of your stories. *waves* Thanx for writing such a great story.
(In some parts, it was so funny that I couldn't stop lauging...yes, I find most stuff funny...Sorry, I'm lagging on, just ignore me.)
| Anon chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
| anaraz chapter 1 . 8/31/2004
that was sweet
| Nouchi chapter 1 . 6/20/2004
Ugh, this pairing is pulling me even more ;_;
Must.. not.. read.. Jou/Mokuba ficcies..
This was cute though, a make out section with Seto after the chase would've made it even better _
| YumeTakato chapter 1 . 6/12/2004
::lol:; This fic was great.
| chipblock123 chapter 1 . 5/20/2004
that was funny the way you had Seto burst in!
| kireira chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
So cute! D The flow is good too. Only that there are quite a lot of spelling mistakes.
| KiAnson chapter 1 . 1/28/2004
That's soo cute... Mokuba got crush on Jounouchi who gonna to be killed by Seto, thought... poor Jounouchi... ;.;
Write more, please ... ;.;
| russle chapter 1 . 12/28/2003
i was in laughter all through the nite you have to rite whats goin to happen next ,i loved the part where kaiba tells him to run,no doubt that was the bit that everybody love but what the hey im just like that
| SecretSoul chapter 1 . 11/29/2003
ok, i was too lazy to sign in, but anyway, i read this fic and about died because it was so cute! in a good way_ i loved it so much i read it again, and it was cute again! much liked it_