Reviews for Sacrifice
Angel08 chapter 8 . 1/4/2004
Dear Lux-Soap,
Since you were asking for ideas, how bout a standoff between the two guys and maybe a big fight? And how about a third guy thrown in? Like make Ron go ballistic or something. Just a thought.
Mon
stickyelf chapter 8 . 9/30/2003
Wow, your story is really great. You just capture emotion so well without it becoming corny. Awesome!

~An Elf Gone Sticky
number1princess chapter 8 . 9/29/2003
great chapter. Give hermione someone to talk to, out of the ordinary maybe...*wink8 spice it up!
Joshulus87 chapter 1 . 9/24/2003
Hey lux-soap, this is Joshulus. I have taken your advice and joined ! Your story is kool! Here is some advice.

1. Give harry access to a time machine

2. When harry is not in a scene, have the characters say, "Where's Harry?"

3. Include a cameo with spongebob squarepants!
SodapopC chapter 8 . 9/23/2003
haha my cousin always listens 2 that song! its pretty good but no hermione dont kill urself! i thought it was a good chapter but ya kinda sad. i dunno y... but i laughed so hard wen she called herself a slut lol. and it didnt really occur 2 me that she might not even kno the word. o-ya and in the other chaoters u really had her not likin ron all but in this one she kinda lightened up on him, and it sorta gave a reason y she was sorta pissy at him, or about him neway. i liked it tho :D
VeriaMatann chapter 8 . 9/23/2003
Oh no! She's not developing suicidal tendancies is she? Oh no! She can't die! But I don't think she would do that anyway... I wonder how Draco is feeling...
harryluvzginny chapter 8 . 9/22/2003
get her to try to commit suicide by jumping off the astronomy tower...but make her leave a note for someone n that some one finds them...like...ron...haha i dunno i want there relationship repaired!:(haha keep goin it's awesome
HarryPotterClayMate87 chapter 8 . 9/22/2003
i loved this chapter- it was great- as for ideas- i have no clue- sorry- well i hope you update soon
darkfire22 chapter 8 . 9/22/2003
Whow, this is a really deep story. it's really good. sry about no review and reading the last 2 chapters. this is very good.
houdinishideaway chapter 8 . 9/22/2003
I think Draco should approach Hermione when she is in a bad mood, and she tells him she doesn't want to play games anymore, and he gets ticked off and threatens to tell Viktor about everything, which would break Victor's heart, unless Hermione aggress to break up with Viktor (who she loves) and go out with him.
hotaru420 chapter 8 . 9/22/2003
aw... poor hermione. I fell bad for her. please continue
SodapopC chapter 7 . 9/21/2003
another great chapter :D
moonypadfoot chapter 7 . 9/21/2003
To tell u the truth, i would sincerely hate dr/hr ship stories. But u make so interesting, that i can't help but love this story! ttyl!
Ratty chapter 6 . 9/21/2003
okay, me again. i read some of your reviews, and saw some great ideas. someone said you should have victor catching them in the act. would make for a very interesting climax. or you could do it the other way around like draco catching hermione and victor and feeling betrayed. either way it would make for an interesting story. when you write it next time, take into consideration some of the things the fans said, including the background info that would work in the first two chapters. the whole victor death eater. maybe hermione has a prediliction towards death eaters (been a naughty girl real bad so and so - im channeling holly valance) anyway. tata

ratty the rat
Ratty chapter 7 . 9/21/2003
My soapy friend, I have arrived to dispel my advices. God, i'm a loser! hehe! Anyway, intriguing, hermione two timing, never thought i'd see that, and still it totally fits her character. as they say, good girls are only bad girls that don't get caught. anyway, i think, when we write this next time (getting away with myself ain't i) we should pace things a little, give more suspense. i've been planning to do that with pasta? since forever, but schedule's disapprove. anyhow, im so glad you've got so many reviews 46! woho, you go girl. I can't wait to see what will happen when Hermione gets caught, its not like she can keep her little game up forever. anyhow, we have to arrange a meeting so we can discuss more. blah, blah, blah. oh by the way i saw finding nemo today. it kicks ass. um, i hope you are enjoying your holidays, and that everything was good on friday. blah, blah, blah. betta go and stop using this medium as a chat room.

tata soapy

ratty the rat (and the awesome friend if i do say so myself)
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