Reviews for Bottomless Pit
DemonKittyAngel chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
You know, you capture that feeling really well.
DragonSteel chapter 1 . 11/29/2004
Oh... that was sad... I love poem-things like this, you know, the persons in pain and they finally get release...

Yes... for some people that is all they really want...

Freaks... girly-girls.

You know what psychopathic suicidal maniac?

No, I don't. And I'm not suicidal, suicide is for weaklings.

...Go to the back of the brain.




Anyways, I'm glad he's happy now, that the pit is indeed botomless.
Bakus-gal200 chapter 1 . 6/10/2004
ok yea that wuz weird ... and random
MariksMyra1614 chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
o..i kinda liked that, i'm gonna print that one. my mom would probably think i'm insane if she read it, but it's not like i'd want to do something like that, it jsut sounds kinda mysterious...i've read a joey-suicide fic, that one was good too, but i like this one better. it sounds more like bakura than ryou
cutebutpsycho chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
i loved it. its awsome. its so...i dunno the word im looking for. but its really good.
chocoboanime chapter 1 . 11/8/2003
that wasn't weird! (i am!) that was good! that was gooder (i mean, better) than average! i loved it!
shadowheart378 chapter 1 . 8/29/2003
*tear*...that has alot of emotion...
CheetorX chapter 1 . 8/28/2003
thtas 't it be in poetry?