Reviews for Hogwarts Pie
Guest chapter 1 . 1/26
This was a very good story , I have rarely seen in all my years of Fanfiction so good of a story with the right amount of Smut and Plot , so you dont feel like your reading porn or reading a totally bland novel , Amazing work , Mild problems such as American Pie copying and Ginnys name being Ginerva rather than Viriginia but other then that a totaly flawless piece of literature which i would recommend for everyone to read , It had proper climax which cast a ot of suspense over me and a good anticlimax . 9.5/10
Another Pot Head chapter 19 . 1/11
I absolutely loved every bit of these past 19 chapters. My only issue is that her name isn't Virginia but is in fact Ginevra. Your writing is perfect, nonetheless.
MovieCritic chapter 15 . 1/10
This is almost a straight rip of the dialogue from American Pie 2...not that it isn't good plot, just pointing it out
Bridget chapter 19 . 12/17/2015
Awesome! I love it! So funny, cute and full of romance!
Guest chapter 19 . 12/2/2015
Omg this was amazing!
BluePhantom123 chapter 1 . 11/5/2015
WTF HOGWARTS PIE WHAT KIND OF BULLSHIT TITLE IS THAT!
Guest chapter 17 . 10/31/2015
THANK YOU FOR PRETENDING THAT THERE WAS NO DRAMA AND EVERYONE IS ALIVE
Guest chapter 7 . 9/14/2015
Ya know harry, maybe juust maybe, you're not crying into you're tea because you're girlfriend didn't DIE FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!
thebetawholived chapter 19 . 8/24/2015
Well, maybe you could have had an alternate ending. With the way Harry keeps spotting the snitch, he could drop the idea of an auror career and try out for Puddlemere.
thebetawholived chapter 18 . 8/24/2015
Romantic story, well-written, but it makes me glad that school was a long, long time ago. The game playing and story-telling was setting my teeth on edge. Still, it's a happy ending story of young love. The physical scenes are tasteful (pun intended) and support the plotline, rather than gratuitous. Worth a read!
thebetawholived chapter 14 . 8/23/2015
So . . . the truth comes out as a lie, the two 'competitors' are in the game with full knowledge of events, and Harry is still as clueless as a nineteen year old can be.

I like the story: it's great and very well-written, but I just want to slap the major characters!
thebetawholived chapter 11 . 8/22/2015
About time!
thebetawholived chapter 5 . 8/22/2015
Harry is actually conditioning himself to think of dead kittens when he thinks of sex.

That could lead to some . . . unfortunate . . . personality quirks sometime in the future.

At least he's working hard at his classes. Fun story so far!
Blazeb79 chapter 19 . 7/31/2015
Lmao. Ok just cuz I loved the epi so much u get my fave.
Blazeb79 chapter 18 . 7/31/2015
Lol funny story.
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