Reviews for Crawling
Athena chapter 1 . 2/9
Hello can you write a fic about the Dream Marik had? All he did was cry for Rishid and your readers don't know what's happening the only thing that was clear in the dream was that Rishid died in the end but everything else was vague.
white pedal chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
It must have been one of Marik's inner demons. Great story.
brittney chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
i cried when rishid died it was just sad!ok dont judge me!
Pheonix09 chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
That was awesome, I loved it and nice job on this
Mojobubbles Kamilah chapter 1 . 2/5/2004
Mojobubbles: ...I'm rereading this 'cause I need sibling fluff. I've not been a very happy person as of late. *reading* ...O_O KAMI-CHAN! HELLSPAWN IS TORMENTING MALIK! *cries*
Kamilah: *hug*
Mojobubbles: *sob* I want Hellspawn to go away...He can't make her hurt anyone...
Kamilah: Hellspawn is the voice inside the head of a very close friend of ours. And he's like Yami Malik/this devil thingy.
Mojobubbles: *shniffle* I'm going off now...
Twilight Feather chapter 1 . 10/14/2003
Awsome story!Your in my faves _
Chaos chapter 1 . 9/1/2003
Hm . . .. **stroking chin and nodding thoughtfully** Interesting . . . . . very interesting . . .

XD Aw heck . . . who am I kiddin'!

LUVED IT!
SashaFan9278 JPJr chapter 1 . 9/1/2003
Another cool story! :) Very exciting and intriguing. I especially like the use of the song. Please write more like this! :)
darkangal322 chapter 1 . 8/31/2003
that was really good
Marik Ishtar chapter 1 . 8/31/2003
Great story!

Keep it up
Chibi Cheesecake chapter 1 . 8/31/2003
Mojobubbles: o.o Sibling fluff and...Linkin Park...? o.o YEAAH! Two of my favorite things.

Kamilah: yay, sibling-fluff.

Yami B: I bet they're gonna find some way to compare this to that movie from last night...

Mojobubbles: Hey, 'Grave of the Fireflies' ROCKED!

Yami B: Feh.

Kamilah: Don't pretend I didn't see you crying when all the little Setsukos were running around!

Yami B: ...I WAS NOT CRYING! I TOLD YOU, MY ALLERGIES WERE ACTING UP!

Mojobubbles: *sniggers and begins reading* NIGHTMARES! o.o

Kamilah: AWW! Rishid loves his brother.

Mojobubbles: Aw, poor Malik. I REMEMBER THE LIGHTNING!

Yami B: Well, yeah...you don't really forget that kind of a moment...

Kamilah: BUHBUHBUM! Who is this evil...person...guy!

Mojobubbles: NUU! RISHID! o.o

Kamilah: BUHBUHBUM! HE'S DEAD! Which means he's coming back. _

Mojobubbles: _ FLUUFFYY! *dances* OOh, I must figure out how to do that Grave-of-the-Fireflies-Malik-Isis fluffie!
Cleansweep11 chapter 1 . 8/31/2003
Ohh...I luv this fic. I agree, sibling cuteness rules! That was some bad dream-I mean, not bad dream, but event-that-actually-happened. Go Marik, go Marik!
Suuki chapter 1 . 8/31/2003
;_; So sweet! XD I luv sibling stuff!
Adelianna chapter 1 . 8/31/2003
_ You're right! Sibling cuteness rules the world. . . along with me! Mw ha ha ha ha ha! Anyway, another great ficcie. I liked the RP also that we did. :D Of course the demon was originally supposed to be an alien, and a humorous one at that. _~ I liked how it transformed into drama and angst, though. Well, keep up the excellent work. Ja ne!

*~*Adelianna
fairywings81 chapter 1 . 8/31/2003
That was unbelieveable. It had me in tears. I can't wait until your next project!
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