|Reviews for It's Not Enough|
| Lyther chapter 8 . 9/3
Absolutely brilliant, I have to say this is certainly darker than your usual stories, makes me wonder how much darker it would be if FF would get rid of the ban?
After reading just the first chapter I found myself compelled to read all the way through. Shame its not been up dated for a while but life has a funny way with taking away our free time.
If you do get back to it, let me know?
| Crimson Yrael chapter 9 . 8/27/2014
While I really Hawk's work, in the wide realm of Love Hina fiction, I'm really, really tired of never seeing anyone tell Tsuruko where can shove her nonsense during this arc.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
you don't drop stories eh (you said so in your profile)? well you DO! none of the stories you have written are finished anyway! you should have at least finished this... or handed it out to others. I just don't know why good stories aren't updated!
| Lord Mortensen chapter 9 . 10/18/2013
Awesome! can you update?
| obsidian-fox chapter 9 . 7/21/2013
I've enjoyed this story.
| Officer Hot-Pants chapter 9 . 1/27/2013
THE PLACES YOU LEAVE OFF! It's like you get off on our anguish.
| Nysk chapter 4 . 10/28/2012
Wish there were lots more
| He Who Dreams chapter 9 . 4/3/2011
Please update this fix tie too good
| Morality0duality chapter 8 . 11/15/2010
are you ever going to continue this this is good you aren;t dead are you.
| Morality0duality chapter 9 . 9/23/2010
Nice story. Also nice cascade failure on motoko psyche.
| Nysk chapter 7 . 8/27/2010
Truly a shame you have not continued this work.
| Brego chapter 9 . 1/29/2010
Wow! Great, great fic. No chance of an update?
| T3Ko chapter 9 . 11/1/2009
Great story. I must say that your building up was great.
| gambit chapter 9 . 4/8/2009
Absolutely evil. You must write more. More, I tell you! More!
| keichan2 chapter 9 . 9/22/2008
I really thought Keitaro would succeed...
And I'm sad to see that you haven't updated this story for so long!
Do you intend to finish it someday, or have you dropped it?
On a side note, it will be a strange wedding, and that is not counting the (un)willingness of the participants, given the physical state they are after the fight... (and not forgetting that most of the female attendance have a thing for the groom...)
Please, I would love to know how Keitaro will give back Motoko her will to live...