Reviews for A Cry In the Dark
Gwynevier chapter 15 . 7/30/2004
(cries) IT'S ALL OVER! (tackles Michel) But I do so love you. You said you share him Juin, and I shall share Vasili and Zaire with you. I can't wait to read the other story. THe ending of this one made me cry, cry very hard, cry a river, NO, and ocean! Damn you Juin, Damn you. Just kidding I love you. (Hugs)

Eternal Love,

Gwynevier
Cat chapter 15 . 6/27/2004
omg i love this story it has to be the best ITFOTN fanfic i have read please please write a sequil please!
Gwynevier chapter 13 . 6/24/2004
I LOVE IT I LOVE I LOVE IT! YOu really should stop beating yourself up, you are a very very talented writer. I would really love to talk about this story more with you. Are writing styles are very much alike. If you have time please email me at

I would really like to chat w/ you some more. Please continue writing it annoys me when writers just stop!Thanks for writing such a great fanfic,

Gwyn
BloodSoakedTiger chapter 12 . 5/13/2004
nice update soon
BR
Lucky Charm 911 chapter 11 . 1/21/2004
good story! i cant wait for you to update! imust know more!
FlitShadowflame chapter 9 . 12/31/2003
yay! you wrote more! *hugs* please update soon!
ZepheriuS chapter 7 . 12/27/2003
are you going to continue this story? i really like it and will continue reading if you keep posting.
A'sBR
FlitShadowflame chapter 7 . 12/13/2003
*chibi chroni hugs xavier, is still all mopey. he bares fangs and she squeals*
interesting.
ShadowBlaze chapter 7 . 12/1/2003
throughout the last few chapters, u've misspelled "neck" (u keep adding a "k" and making it "kneck" when it should be "neck") but other than that, this was interesting. didn't know a kid could have so much rage...so was xavier some sort of triste witch too? or something like that? otherwise how would he do the whole fire deal. and also, instead of calling his mother mere (too lazy to find the correct "e" key with the accent over it) he prolly woulda called her "maman" (an affectionate type name, like the modern day "mom" or "mama" or "mommy", and anything else along those lines...) oh yeah, and it sux that audrey didn't get to kill dominique...but did xavier? and where did he take her? anywho, update soon...
~*ShadowBlaze*~
dracorium chapter 5 . 11/30/2003
yummy...
NoLongerUpdated chapter 1 . 11/1/2003
Meep An Eye for an Eye Leaves the whole world blind is from Gandhi ((sp?)) but the whole an eye for an eye thing is from the Hammaruabi thingy I think. There was also somethign like if you tryrobbing a hosue you get killed in front of it and buried there I think hehe. Meep I can't really spell on the computer to well ((as we all can see very nicely here hehe)). And in Demon in My View I think it said soemthing like fi you were blood bonded with a vampire you ahve to kill the vampire but the person can't die./
ShadowBlaze chapter 4 . 10/29/2003
i can just picture michel in that first scene: lounging in an old-fashioned chair (the one u typically see in a old horror movies where there's a chair facing a fire, then the camera swings around and shows some god-awful creature/dead thing in the chair...lol) with a fire in the fireplace behind him so it looks like he's sorta glowing, legs crossed (ya know, the "guy" way with one ankle on the other knee), one arm resting on the (go figure) armrest, while the elbow is balanced on the armrest, holding the glass of wine up to the light and sorta swirling it around in the glass. and i could say more, but that'd be really random... corrections: "chateua" is misspelled in "...Xavier was sitting next to Michel in his cheateau..."; "testing" is misspelled in "..He was testign Xavier's patience..."; "remember" is misspelled in "...If you rmemebr correctly ..."; "gasping" is misspelled in "..Michel fell to the ground gaspign.." and that's it. the background info was good, and the hint at xavier's mother was interesting; i hope u plan on going into the details of that somewhere along the line. so, update soon!

~*ShadowBlaze*~
ShadowBlaze chapter 3 . 10/29/2003
"An eye for an eye leaves the world blind." i can't remember who said that, but catherine should really get that drilled into her head. lol Kaei could die...if someone killed her, or if someone killed Jager (i think that's who she's bloodbonded to, right?) and she seems OOC...i dunno, maybe just cuz AAR didn't right anything about her and her reactions to witches, but i thought that kaei was the easy-going, nice-to-everyone type of person... anywho, corrections: "slammed" is misspelled in "...I saw that whoever pulled her off had slamemd..." (a minor typo...); same thing with "attacking" in "...I thought about atatcking..."; "definitely" shouldn't have an "a" in "...He was a vampire, definiatley..."; "spent" shouldn't have an "a" in "...I had to hide in my car for two days without food and speant two weeks worrying..."; there shouldn't be an "o" in "since" ("...none attacked sionce Xavier had blood claim..."). "liked" is misspelled in "...Kaei was one of the citizens of New Mayhem who liekd.."; "alive" should be one word in "...If she was still a live today...", and in "...Is she still a live?..." and in "Am I still a live?". and that's it. ah-HA! so adianna and abrosia were twins. ok, that clears things up a bit...this was good, and now i'm gonna go review the next chapter...

~*ShadowBlaze*~
Ather Midnight chapter 4 . 10/29/2003
Looks great I hope there will be more.
dracorium chapter 4 . 10/20/2003
-coolness, write more, I'll be looking out.-
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