Reviews for Why don't you try smiling
vlissan chapter 1 . 10/25/2007
Cute! Awesome story!
RyuuKai chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
I think this is one of your best fics _ I liked the touch of realism you should write some more beyblade
CosmicEssence chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
That was interesting. It was probably verging on the romance factor though your right I'm not sure if I would call that romance either.
NekoAnime chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
This was a rather bitter sweet story but I liked it. _ Poor Tyson but at least he got a real smile from Kai, and a chain to boot. Maxie and the rest amused me with their little 'get together plan' and fireworks. Its a shame they couldn't get the last of the fireworks to go off. I wanted Tyson to confess. I'm also curious at to what exactly it was that Tyson was wearing since you didn't really describe it and it seemed to make Kai blush. _~ Very cute story, I hope you decide to write more Tyka fics.
FlowerAssassin chapter 1 . 10/25/2005
sweet
Rukiabi chapter 1 . 4/15/2005
It's so sweet kya
El Conejo Morado chapter 1 . 10/23/2004
WAI! KAWAIINESS! ANO FICCU WA DAISUKI!
akari-hayashi chapter 1 . 9/8/2004
Aww... This is so sweet. And Kai is in character! I read a few fics in which Kai is so OOC. I don't mind that but I like Kai in the anime nya, cold and calm. Tyson is so cute as well...
brittie bear chapter 1 . 6/27/2004
WAI! SO KAWAII!
Tai-writer chapter 1 . 6/22/2004
That was SO kawaii! Aww, he smiled for him. So sweet, knew he had it in him!
Russa chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
Hi! Wowee! This story may not be romance much, but it's still sweet. I really liked it. I'm glad everything worked out for Tyson and Kai. And Tyson's right; Kai really should trying smiling more often. Although, I guess if he did smile often, then it wouldn't be as special. Very well writen. Good luck with your other stories. Ciao! _
Angevar chapter 1 . 2/29/2004
Me: That was so romance! It's better than mine at any rate...
CP: I told you, don't beat yourself up! That's my job and it's on my contract!
Me: Shaddup CP, I don't wanna hear about it! *to Mizu-Tenshi* Meh, don't ask me why I'm here, I'm just browsing around through everyones faves lists and I somehow landed up here... Damn good story. Cute and fluffy, just the way I like em! And even if therte wasn't really all that much romancy fluff, it was still damn cute. I think you should continue it if you can. You know, how they feel after it... it would probably be a damn good story.
Brigs: Are you finished yet?
Me: No,why dod you ask?
Brigs: Becaus ethat college search page finally loaded...
Me: ; Gotta run, being a junior in HIgh School sux! I'm putting you on my alerts list cause I think you're awesome!
Cheating Gravity chapter 1 . 2/8/2004
Ohie that was wonderful! I wanted to cry with Tyson it was so sad. It was very happy at the end though. Thats what counts. Happy endings... I'm off now too find some sugar! BYE!
artemis347 chapter 1 . 12/18/2003
i like it! kai smiling!
Timmesque chapter 1 . 11/27/2003
ME: That's so sweet...
Kai: I DO NOT SMILE!
CS: Then what do you call the thing on your face Hiwatari?
Kai: Lips.
ME and CS fall anime style.
ME: *ubs her head* That hurts... Anyway, keep on writing!
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