|Reviews for Why don't you try smiling|
| vlissan chapter 1 . 10/25/2007
Cute! Awesome story!
| RyuuKai chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
I think this is one of your best fics _ I liked the touch of realism you should write some more beyblade
| CosmicEssence chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
That was interesting. It was probably verging on the romance factor though your right I'm not sure if I would call that romance either.
| NekoAnime chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
This was a rather bitter sweet story but I liked it. _ Poor Tyson but at least he got a real smile from Kai, and a chain to boot. Maxie and the rest amused me with their little 'get together plan' and fireworks. Its a shame they couldn't get the last of the fireworks to go off. I wanted Tyson to confess. I'm also curious at to what exactly it was that Tyson was wearing since you didn't really describe it and it seemed to make Kai blush. _~ Very cute story, I hope you decide to write more Tyka fics.
| FlowerAssassin chapter 1 . 10/25/2005
| Rukiabi chapter 1 . 4/15/2005
It's so sweet kya
| El Conejo Morado chapter 1 . 10/23/2004
WAI! KAWAIINESS! ANO FICCU WA DAISUKI!
| akari-hayashi chapter 1 . 9/8/2004
Aww... This is so sweet. And Kai is in character! I read a few fics in which Kai is so OOC. I don't mind that but I like Kai in the anime nya, cold and calm. Tyson is so cute as well...
| brittie bear chapter 1 . 6/27/2004
WAI! SO KAWAII!
| Tai-writer chapter 1 . 6/22/2004
That was SO kawaii! Aww, he smiled for him. So sweet, knew he had it in him!
| Russa chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
Hi! Wowee! This story may not be romance much, but it's still sweet. I really liked it. I'm glad everything worked out for Tyson and Kai. And Tyson's right; Kai really should trying smiling more often. Although, I guess if he did smile often, then it wouldn't be as special. Very well writen. Good luck with your other stories. Ciao! _
| Angevar chapter 1 . 2/29/2004
Me: That was so romance! It's better than mine at any rate...
CP: I told you, don't beat yourself up! That's my job and it's on my contract!
Me: Shaddup CP, I don't wanna hear about it! *to Mizu-Tenshi* Meh, don't ask me why I'm here, I'm just browsing around through everyones faves lists and I somehow landed up here... Damn good story. Cute and fluffy, just the way I like em! And even if therte wasn't really all that much romancy fluff, it was still damn cute. I think you should continue it if you can. You know, how they feel after it... it would probably be a damn good story.
Brigs: Are you finished yet?
Me: No,why dod you ask?
Brigs: Becaus ethat college search page finally loaded...
Me: ; Gotta run, being a junior in HIgh School sux! I'm putting you on my alerts list cause I think you're awesome!
| Cheating Gravity chapter 1 . 2/8/2004
Ohie that was wonderful! I wanted to cry with Tyson it was so sad. It was very happy at the end though. Thats what counts. Happy endings... I'm off now too find some sugar! BYE!
| artemis347 chapter 1 . 12/18/2003
i like it! kai smiling!
| Timmesque chapter 1 . 11/27/2003
ME: That's so sweet...
Kai: I DO NOT SMILE!
CS: Then what do you call the thing on your face Hiwatari?
ME and CS fall anime style.
ME: *ubs her head* That hurts... Anyway, keep on writing!