Shinji is a sellfish piece of shit in this story. Makes it hard to care about him as a reader.

Yeah I didn't really like this...
Idk, the OCs were honestly really annoying, & I feel like u could have written this without the need for them. I mean, this wasn't bad, but this really seemed like a cheesy rom-com harem anime, which isn't really what Ava's about.

I just had to write a review for this fanfiction. This was a whirlwind of emotions! Every chapter was just so full of emotions and drama. Love it! Every other fanfic that i read that takes place after the 3rd impact, Asuka is the same person. But, here you actually gave her a change in her personality. Thank you for writing this!

That was a roller coaster of a story and it was a good Rollercoaster. I liked the ending where you hinted towards Misato there. Very suave. 1 review.

This story is sooooooo irritatingly stupid. I think I hate this shinji far worse than the annoying crybaby from the series. And damn those ocs were even more annoying. And don't even get me started on this wimpy asuka. Honestly I try not to be harsh on reviews and this is an old story but damn did this ever piss me off as an Eva fan.

I don't like romance heavy stories. My preference for romance is it being a side dish, to be the second or third fiddle instead of the main attraction of the zoo that is a story.
Except for your works.
I can't exactly pinpoint the reasons for that; it might be the characterisation or the pacing or something completely different, but something still is there regardless.

So yeah. I liked it.

Random1377 is imho the best EVA fanfic author EVER. He's written more than any other author I read and the quality is always high despite the quantity. The Third Side is one of my fav fics of his so I thought I'd finally review it. Read this fic and then read the rest of his!

You have a grudge against scene breakers? I like your writing, but I get disoriented for the first two sentences every scene.

Nice work. You gave the development enough time, and moved the story on just the same. Quite a feat, in my opinion.

As usual you overpower me with your storytelling abilities, something I can merely admire from four thousend miles off...

Anyway.

I bid you farewell, and in good faith i leave you.

Henry V

i almost didn't leave a comment cause it always feels awkward, because emotions are hard to convey with out complex wordings of sentences, but after this i feel i must. i have read many of your EVA fics and enjoyed them all greatly. i for one am not a fan of OC's but the way you made Sachiko and Mitzu into characters that you come think of as part of the EVA series, not just them but your other OC's as well, i think fanfictions should be made of them as well.

as stated before emotions are a hard medium to capture. but in all seriousness great work of art sir.

Awesome story, I don't know how I miss this while reading your fanfic until now!

Abso-friggin-lutely perfect!

I agree that your two girls got more development than Asuka, and that fact kind of making Shinji not so important too. In addition, with the comparison against Touji and Alexander, I would say Shinji somehow became... a doll!

And know what... out of these three girls I somehow "voted" for Sachiko. Asuka is far too denying in chapter 2 that it seemed too hard to let her make "up" (and then "out" and "love") to Shinji. And as for Mitzu you wrote her background and actions to make her less sympathizable... Sadly Sachiko panicked at her own move so soon so she had been crossed out quickly.

Nevertheless, an in-depth good job!

That was great!

This was good