Reviews for The Long Night
Duh Red chapter 7 . 11/19/2004
Cool stuff...high frontier gypsies? And thanks for making PixDixy's name so much easier...as for the 23? A RAW reference? ...

Good solid form and function...just one typo that I caught ("mealy the begining-") and another that I wonder at...since I haven't had much time on Moo3 I don't know the nuances...Yrn's name...or sometimes Yrr? Typo? Or is there some deeper meaning? Do the two different names meen that the Evon has differnt personalities or aspects or voices? (being a super spy trained by a morphic Darlok can be so trying on the psyche...) I'm experimenting with a story my self on different mental states of aliens and such...how to convey the absolute 'difference' of an alien mind...I'll have to read more Phillip K. Dick to get suitably discognicent...

I await the rest and will seek more...later...

-Mark
mehgirl chapter 7 . 4/21/2004
aww.. it's tto bad you discontinued it! it was great!
mehgirl chapter 7 . 4/21/2004
aww.. it's tto bad you discontinued it! it was great!
mehgirl chapter 7 . 4/21/2004
aww.. it's tto bad you discontinued it! it was great!
Flick Montana chapter 7 . 10/1/2003
Nice to see another Moo3 fan out there. And someone who can write, too. I really enjoy your story and I'm glad you have near flawless grammatical skills as well. Your story is well-written, easy on the eyes and very entertaining! Thanks for posting it!

AAron