Reviews for Amulet of Time 4: There and Back Again |
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![]() ![]() ![]() yeah! |
![]() ![]() ![]() luv it... again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you can get up to this foreshadowing in the sequels |
![]() ![]() ![]() An interesting series. The title sounds more like a hobbit fic than a harry potter fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Exellent, I really enjoyed this story, stories, actually. I have only one questoin: Who is the Lightning Lord? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, i must say this was a huge, great, awesome story. I was surprised at the ending...a cliffy. The Lightning Lord...Harry Potter? But is he evil? that is the question. Maybe the Ministry is just so bad that Harry has to take it down. Maybe its not even harry. So many questions! i love this story, all four of them. i hope the others are finished, but i don't remember them being done. That makes me very sad. I hate it when authors don't finish stories. I know for me i feel obligated to finish, even if its just a quick crappy ending, at least it's ended. Your writing is definitely good enough to move on to the real deal and away from Fanfiction. I'm not sure if you even get these reviews anymore, but if you do, i'd like to know why you stopped writing. Your talent is very good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well at least he isn't dead... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I must say this treatment for Umbridge is way, way more fitting. making her go crazy is amazingly perfect! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH! Harry's son! OMG! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, the 'end'... In this story I was bit more frustrated than the others. I understand that they were encouraged not to use wandless magic and there was a big buildup with this and the battle with shirly -however- It was kind of anticlimactic. Don't get me wrong, I love this series, you have VERY original and complex storylines but I just feel like the voldy battle was a footnote in the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() what in the world... That is a twist for sure... I can't believe you have more time traveling going on. Thought for sure that you were done with it but I guess you aren't. I would of never expected this. I don't know if I will ever get this lucky again in a fan fic. It's not often you see that I get to be surprised like this. Great job. Till next time, Tad |
![]() ![]() ![]() i'm happy finally harry and ginny are together bound forever! _ p. do mean the lighting lord? do u mean harry? |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... i am now proposing my undying love for you xD no srsly, this is the best umbridge bashing EVER. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! Onto the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() can't wait to read the final story |