|Reviews for The Secrets of Snape|
| MysticMagic chapter 9 . 8/1/2016
Amazing...I loved this as well at the other stories they are well written and just...amazing
| Ashely Snape chapter 7 . 8/1/2016
Ooooo RON SHOULD BE A DEATH EATER BECAUSE I DONT LIKE HIM AT ALL! I LIKE EVIL RON MAMAHAMAHI LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THESE STORY AND THE OTHER TWO THERE AWESOME
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/20/2016
If you are going to be mad at me for not liking them then it is over. You have really betrayed my trust. I can't believe you would do that 's. That is disgusting. Unless you come back now, I will not stay with you; I will not even be friends with you. I advise you come back. They are all bad apples.
Am I the only one wondering why the hell he said 'Love, Ron'?
| lilyflower101 chapter 10 . 7/5/2015
Love it! More please! :)
| Akatsuki Uchiha fangirl chapter 10 . 5/1/2015
I wish you would finish this story it's great
| marthapreston4 chapter 7 . 9/11/2014
why would he just tell a child first and not an adult who he trusted for years
| marthapreston4 chapter 6 . 9/11/2014
okay why did you make a big deal with blake screaming at harry for abandoning thier father when he goes and does the exact same thing
| marthapreston4 chapter 1 . 9/11/2014
I this start out juicy i like how you didnt completly try to change thier names ...or are you
| Darkangel-932 chapter 1 . 8/3/2014
I like the idea for your story but it was kind of weird reading it and there were so many capital letters that weren't really needed, it also felt rushed
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/31/2014
keep ron mean
| abel chapter 3 . 5/31/2014
it was great
| Isnape24 chapter 10 . 8/12/2012
| Eris Potter-Charmed Child chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
| My Muse's Name Is Eden chapter 10 . 1/27/2012
I love it I love it I love it! Dumbledore is their grandfather was a great twist! Keep it up!
| Prince of Persia chapter 2 . 12/17/2010
And then he heard Sirius's mind pop back where it was supposed to be.
How, exactly, does one's mind "pop back?" That makes no sense. I think you need a bit more work with your phrases and such.
Also you don't need to MAKE EVERYTHING CAPITAL THAT YOU WOULD LIKE TO EMPHASIZE. That is mostly done by italicizing words.
Everything just seems rushed, as well. Oh, Snape, you're my dad? Okay. My name's Blake? okay. I look completely different? Okay. Now I'm friends with my former enemy? Well, that's just peachy keen.
There is no real conflict to the story. It's just boring.