Reviews for The Secrets of Snape
MysticMagic chapter 9 . 8/1
Amazing...I loved this as well at the other stories they are well written and just...amazing
Ashely Snape chapter 7 . 8/1
Ooooo RON SHOULD BE A DEATH EATER BECAUSE I DONT LIKE HIM AT ALL! I LIKE EVIL RON MAMAHAMAHI LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THESE STORY AND THE OTHER TWO THERE AWESOME
Guest chapter 4 . 4/20
Hermione,
If you are going to be mad at me for not liking them then it is over. You have really betrayed my trust. I can't believe you would do that 's. That is disgusting. Unless you come back now, I will not stay with you; I will not even be friends with you. I advise you come back. They are all bad apples.

Love, Ron

Am I the only one wondering why the hell he said 'Love, Ron'?
lilyflower101 chapter 10 . 7/5/2015
Love it! More please! :)
Akatsuki Uchiha fangirl chapter 10 . 5/1/2015
I wish you would finish this story it's great
marthapreston4 chapter 7 . 9/11/2014
why would he just tell a child first and not an adult who he trusted for years
marthapreston4 chapter 6 . 9/11/2014
okay why did you make a big deal with blake screaming at harry for abandoning thier father when he goes and does the exact same thing
marthapreston4 chapter 1 . 9/11/2014
I this start out juicy i like how you didnt completly try to change thier names ...or are you
Darkangel-932 chapter 1 . 8/3/2014
I like the idea for your story but it was kind of weird reading it and there were so many capital letters that weren't really needed, it also felt rushed
Guest chapter 6 . 5/31/2014
keep ron mean
abel chapter 3 . 5/31/2014
it was great
Isnape24 chapter 10 . 8/12/2012
Good story
Eris Potter-Charmed Child chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
Wooohooo great!
My Muse's Name Is Eden chapter 10 . 1/27/2012
I love it I love it I love it! Dumbledore is their grandfather was a great twist! Keep it up!
Prince of Persia chapter 2 . 12/17/2010
And then he heard Sirius's mind pop back where it was supposed to be.

How, exactly, does one's mind "pop back?" That makes no sense. I think you need a bit more work with your phrases and such.

Also you don't need to MAKE EVERYTHING CAPITAL THAT YOU WOULD LIKE TO EMPHASIZE. That is mostly done by italicizing words.

Everything just seems rushed, as well. Oh, Snape, you're my dad? Okay. My name's Blake? okay. I look completely different? Okay. Now I'm friends with my former enemy? Well, that's just peachy keen.

There is no real conflict to the story. It's just boring.
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