Reviews for Uncontrolled |
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![]() ![]() Hello: I loved this story. It was...like...magical...Christmas...sparkles...night club...Barbie life in the dreamhouse...My little pony...My little pony humans...and real life... |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol the puberty stage. who made that comment serena? |
![]() ![]() I loved this fan fic! The characters were fun and written well. The author didn't rely on the already present emotional attachment the reader has for the characters, she made you love them again. I also enjoyed how long this was. A lot of fan fiction is short and unfinished. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *sigh* |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just loved the story... The guards as babies Was just so fun! And the club with all of Them watching them dance... Poor kunzite I think he Was the most affected bby the dance besides darien! I kinda wish evil kunzite had kidnap mina or made kunzite watch as he kissed her... I just enjoyed the story so much... And the sex scenes were al good! |
![]() ![]() Aww.. Such a lovely story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my kami-sama i laugh so hard i rool of my high bed and on to the tiled floor laughing while my bf and sis and her bf fell laughing very hard this is so good MAKE MORE PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh i got a headache from laughing so hard |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a really good story love the humor |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this story. It was very funny when the guys were baby's and talking to one another. Then with the Girls, to funny. The last few chapters were a little sad with all that drama but overall I liked the story plot. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() yey! found another story with a great plot, well written, kidney-popping funny and soooo sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So cute loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() How old are they?" Mina asked, looking at the five boys, sprawled on the huge bed with their clothes almost ripping at the seams. There was beeping from the computer and Ami looked back at the boys. "It says they're five years old." Was her final answer FIVE BOYS? WEREN'T THERE FOUR!1 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice ending ) Great story! |