|Reviews for Hearts Can Break|
| Guest chapter 22 . 9/3
Please complete the story.. you have a gift ..
And so often on fanficton there sooooooo many good stories that never get completed. It is very frustrating as hell. This is coming from someone who's been in the fan fiction world as a reader non stop for about 4 years now . Plzzzz finish ..great job
| Guest chapter 16 . 9/26/2016
I'm going to start off the review with a background of my opinion of the movie.
I don't mind the movie. In fact I think it is highly engaging with the visual effects, along with the idea of how couples would've responded within this scenario. Opens the eyes more. Romance isn't my genre, but this movie has to be a very powerful work within the romantic category. The only bit that bothered me with the plot was the fast relationship over the course of three days. (Day 1 - Rose saved from suicide. Day 2 - first kiss and sex. Day 3 - Ship sinks, Jack dies for her.). Then again I'm too much of a perfectionist and a realist, plus I don't understand the dynamics within different romantic relationships. :P
Anyway. For some reason after I first stumbled across this written work it's imprinted in my mind. I'm constantly going back to read a chapter of this story. You've captured the emotions, and distinctive detail of everything occurring for each character. (And I will mention I'm one who goes into detail within their school work or work in general. It's nice to see someone like you have the same ethic as me hehe). In comparison to the movie your novelisation of it develops a more horrific, dramatic (good way) and emotional stigma of the movie. If the movie won an Oscar, my gosh your work would win at least 10 Oscars, along with multiple other awards. The description about the icy air how everyone felt, their thoughts (exceptional with Jack praying to the Lord about the wellbeing of the female protagonist in chapter 16!) makes the movie more exciting to watch. I can imagine your fanfic being published in the near future. Believe me it deserves to be highly commended across the world, authors association, Hollywood and most importantly the bookshelf! (Sorry inter web.).
Exceptional effort with astonishing results. Well done! Keep writing! You are on the way to becoming a miniature J.K Rowling.
| Guest chapter 10 . 8/8/2013
CAL IS A GOD DAMN FUCKING 30 YEAR OLD AN ROSE IS 17 THATS JUST NASTY
| Maria chapter 24 . 5/25/2013
Incredible detail and relation to the event. You are a phenomenal writer!
| BandofTitanic chapter 11 . 1/3/2013
This is amazing! I firmly believe the band played this hymn
| toastatemymom chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
This is Awesome
| TITANIC chapter 24 . 5/29/2012
This is my favourite Titanic Fanfiction. I love the detail in your descriptions of the scenes in the movies.
| HushHush0987 chapter 3 . 6/9/2011
This is really good!
| brianna chapter 24 . 10/7/2010
| firebolt669 chapter 24 . 9/25/2008
Oh my Lord...you are an amzing writer. I printed this out and read it at school, and at first I skipped over the movie parts...then I started to read you descriptions...oh my God, you are absolutely incredible. The only itty-bitty thing I would suggest is maybe double space you lines or between paragraphs, it's a little hard to see, but that's just formatting, the writing is fantastic
| EmRosey chapter 24 . 1/16/2007
omg! that was great! *so sad :'(*
| NoDoubtFan chapter 24 . 1/27/2006
Well, Well, written. The whole story is beautiful. I loved it. "Forever By the Sea" is just as amazing as well. You have really amazing writing skills.
| PhantomFan13 chapter 24 . 10/9/2005
wow! your story is amazing. so many emotions and it was so wonderfully written!
| Pepper chapter 11 . 8/1/2005
This is always the part of the movie where tears start coursing down my cheeks... You have captured that moment beautifully! This would have to be one of the most powerful chapters I've ever read in the fanfic genre. Great job!
"The time was wrong. It had stopped at 2:00 A.M. He exhaled deeply. Time would stop tonight for all of the souls left onboard, all of the children .
He took out his pocket watch and closely examined it. It was still working and read 2:12. He opened the face of the elaborate clock in front of him and appropriately set it. Now time would stand still." POWERFUL
the old man with his wife, the woman with her young children-I really loved how you gave everyone a back story!
| pendulii chapter 24 . 4/14/2005
This is too good for words!Amazing!