|Reviews for On The Edge|
| Liza chapter 1 . 11/22/2001
hmm... that was... interesting. But in the future, you shouldnt talk about cutting wrists and sucicide and such if you dont really know what your talking about. Some people actually do that and the Pokemon have nothing to be depressed about.
| Sasami Jurai chapter 1 . 7/5/2000
That was sad, yet it was VERY good! I don't get how people get off telling you to use paragraphs! Sometimes when I upload things on they come out a lot different than when I first typed them up. Just tell people to back off!
_ -Sailor Uranus, the tough senshi _
| Blue9Tiger Mondo chapter 1 . 6/2/2000
OH MY GOD! WHAT WAS THAT? Have you heard of paragraphs or punctuation? And...what was the plot? It could have used a lot more development. SCARY!