|Reviews for Virtual Reality|
| greeneyeswhitedragon chapter 5 . 11/7/2003
GEWD: you updated_..I kept forgetting to check..I sorry
Yami GEWD: thank you for you review..it was very helpful..however with Tea's Hero we need more good reviews to keep the story
GEWD: *nods* stupid flamers..beware of them..lol
Yami GEWD: can't wait for another update though
| Dragon and Sword Master chapter 5 . 10/31/2003
Okay, what the hell just happened? This is a good story that you have here, and you are welcome for me pointing out those mistakes. Also, I remember that Kiaba said that people weren't programmed into this game, but there were only three people that were "Kidnapped" Joey, Tea, and Mokuba, so who does Reuktai represent?
| Dragonic Soul chapter 5 . 10/27/2003
I see a Seto Kaiba breakdown in the near future... yes... I see him curled into a ball, sucking his thumb... with Joey-kun taunting him...
Ok... sorry. This is really good. "Oh, ya mean this stuff that comes offa my wings?" I LOVED that! Course, I also love joey. _ Keep it up!
| Dragon and Sword Master chapter 4 . 10/19/2003
Well, this is interesting. Please continue with this story. BTW, what is the game called, and can they summon monsters while they are in it?
| Kazuki Landen chapter 4 . 10/7/2003
Cool fic! But aquantences is spelt acquaintances. Otherwise you spelt it all right! Well done! Sorry. It gets way annoying when people cant spell!
Once again, Cool fic!
| Dragonic Soul chapter 4 . 10/6/2003
-_-; Yeah, glowing ivy is never a good sign. Heh, make joey be a doggy! OH, Kasa-chan, I have a really funyn YGo fic thats sort of a parody of Trading Spaces Boys vs. Girls, I've got joey and Tristan against Serentiy and Mai. Will there be doggies? Yes. Yes there will be.
| MoonlitKaitou chapter 3 . 9/23/2003
Hey that was a real good chapter! As well as the other 2! I really laughed so hard when I found out Joey was a dog! XD Way too funny! Anyway cant wait for when you write the next chapter and good luck! Bye now!
| Kazuki Landen chapter 3 . 9/22/2003
Wicked! I know what it feels like to not have any ideas. Mean. evil,mean,and nasty.
On a rather different subject- Please read my fics! I read all yours and it would be so wicked if you reviewed my fics! You are one of my fav authors, and I would so totally love it if you reviewed my fics! Oh, and I need encouragement! This probably sounds like I'm begging for reviews- I am! Mymate has more than me,and its not fair! Plus I've run out of ideas. Life aint fair,is it.
| Dragonic Soul chapter 3 . 9/18/2003
::squeal:: EEks! This is so coolies! Hurry with the next chappy! BTW, sorry bout my other comment, I obbssessed with Fire and Dark type pokémon... I have issues... I think I'm half ditto... I'll shut up now.
| greeneyeswhitedragon chapter 2 . 9/16/2003
GEWD: We'll make you a deal_
Yami GEWD: you update thi quick and I'll update the fic your reading quick_
| Kazuki Landen chapter 2 . 9/14/2003
See what I mean about the psychiatrist? Or maybe a strait-jacket maker... Cool fic, if a bit odd...
| Kazuki Landen chapter 1 . 9/14/2003
Ok... I think you need to go to a psychiatrist or something... You are rather odd...
| Dragonic Soul chapter 2 . 9/9/2003
Terana: -_-; Sorry bout her.
Terana: Shes just in love with Joey.
Sammi: Pentai! Hey, is there any connection between the beauty that is Pentai and the beauty that is the pokémon Entai? ::drools at the thgouth of both together::
Terana: Sammi, you are a hopeless Hikari.
Sammi: SHADDUP! I'M UPDATING MY JOEY SHRINE!
| Rare Hunter Seto chapter 1 . 9/7/2003
Well, it kinda does seem like it'll follow the episode
And the pod game thing has already been done
Sorry mate, I think you should work on another one, we all produce not our best work at times, just keep at it, and I'm sure you'll exceed
| Qk chapter 1 . 9/7/2003
It's pretty good so far, but it's spelt "Kaiba" not "Kiaba"