Reviews for Virtual Reality |
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![]() ![]() ![]() GEWD: you updated_..I kept forgetting to check..I sorry Yami GEWD: thank you for you review..it was very helpful..however with Tea's Hero we need more good reviews to keep the story GEWD: *nods* stupid flamers..beware of them..lol Yami GEWD: can't wait for another update though |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, what the hell just happened? This is a good story that you have here, and you are welcome for me pointing out those mistakes. Also, I remember that Kiaba said that people weren't programmed into this game, but there were only three people that were "Kidnapped" Joey, Tea, and Mokuba, so who does Reuktai represent? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I see a Seto Kaiba breakdown in the near future... yes... I see him curled into a ball, sucking his thumb... with Joey-kun taunting him... Ok... sorry. This is really good. "Oh, ya mean this stuff that comes offa my wings?" I LOVED that! Course, I also love joey. _ Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, this is interesting. Please continue with this story. BTW, what is the game called, and can they summon monsters while they are in it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool fic! But aquantences is spelt acquaintances. Otherwise you spelt it all right! Well done! Sorry. It gets way annoying when people cant spell! Once again, Cool fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() -_-; Yeah, glowing ivy is never a good sign. Heh, make joey be a doggy! OH, Kasa-chan, I have a really funyn YGo fic thats sort of a parody of Trading Spaces Boys vs. Girls, I've got joey and Tristan against Serentiy and Mai. Will there be doggies? Yes. Yes there will be. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey that was a real good chapter! As well as the other 2! I really laughed so hard when I found out Joey was a dog! XD Way too funny! Anyway cant wait for when you write the next chapter and good luck! Bye now! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wicked! I know what it feels like to not have any ideas. Mean. evil,mean,and nasty. On a rather different subject- Please read my fics! I read all yours and it would be so wicked if you reviewed my fics! You are one of my fav authors, and I would so totally love it if you reviewed my fics! Oh, and I need encouragement! This probably sounds like I'm begging for reviews- I am! Mymate has more than me,and its not fair! Plus I've run out of ideas. Life aint fair,is it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ::squeal:: EEks! This is so coolies! Hurry with the next chappy! BTW, sorry bout my other comment, I obbssessed with Fire and Dark type pokémon... I have issues... I think I'm half ditto... I'll shut up now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() GEWD: We'll make you a deal_ Yami GEWD: you update thi quick and I'll update the fic your reading quick_ |
![]() ![]() ![]() See what I mean about the psychiatrist? Or maybe a strait-jacket maker... Cool fic, if a bit odd... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok... I think you need to go to a psychiatrist or something... You are rather odd... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sammi: ::drool:: Terana: -_-; Sorry bout her. Sammi: EKS! Terana: Shes just in love with Joey. Sammi: Pentai! Hey, is there any connection between the beauty that is Pentai and the beauty that is the pokémon Entai? ::drools at the thgouth of both together:: Terana: Sammi, you are a hopeless Hikari. Sammi: SHADDUP! I'M UPDATING MY JOEY SHRINE! Terana: -_-; |
![]() ![]() Well, it kinda does seem like it'll follow the episode And the pod game thing has already been done Sorry mate, I think you should work on another one, we all produce not our best work at times, just keep at it, and I'm sure you'll exceed |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's pretty good so far, but it's spelt "Kaiba" not "Kiaba" |