Reviews for Fatherhood
The Madhatter2 chapter 5 . 10/13/2003
Omg. What in the world took me so long to find and read this fic? My goodness. Slap me. :P

This is a wonderful fic! I love it! I love how it's about fatherhood and there's a lot of Jack! :D And that last chapter from Irina's POV was awesome. The last three lines really got to me. I just don't know how you do it. It's amazing, really. Wonderful wonderful job.
Jayme chapter 4 . 10/2/2003
That was GREAT. I hope you keep writing, the emotion seems to real. Well done! Jayme
Gray Sunset chapter 4 . 10/2/2003
Aww, these were great!
Jayme chapter 3 . 9/24/2003
That was really good, it made me wanna cry. I loved seeing the softer side of Sloane, because unlike so many people, I actually think he does have one and that was totally sweet. Well Done.

Are we gonna get a Dixon or Will? William Vaughn maybe?
xanya-forever chapter 2 . 9/9/2003
This is really sad, but kind of happy to. you've done a great job, the perspectives are exactly in character, and I feel that both Jack and Vaugh are right in their own ways. Well done and write lots more!