|Reviews for Scared and Alone|
| MissAnniiii chapter 10 . 1/11
This story is really good okay... an invisible man and an invisible baby is not the best idea. But the other things in the story area very nice. I love ever couple. And the idea to make a crossover of LTP and TP is so so thank you very much to be so creative
| dancer in the night chapter 10 . 12/8/2008
amazing story i have great pleasure reading this story
| AgentKalGibbs chapter 10 . 11/11/2007
oh my god, i just started reading pretender fanfics yesterday, after watching the last movie, and this is so awesome! great work! :)
| Wee-hoo chapter 10 . 5/22/2006
What a sweet ending! I like it... Hugs and kisses hope we meet soon
| Nancy chapter 10 . 4/5/2006
So glad to see your posting. This was a very enjoyable story. Thanks for finishing it. Life is good - everyone FINALLY is free and is FINALLY happy. Keep writing.
| Nans chapter 10 . 4/5/2006
She silently thanked Sydney for being so nice. He was actually like a father to all of them, and he was the best father she could ever have.
Would expect nothing less from Sydney
Thank you for finishing your story
| CanonAntithesis chapter 10 . 4/5/2006
Thanks for finishing this. Happy endings all around.
| michelle chapter 7 . 2/11/2004
I almost quit reading when the baby turned out to be invisible in the last chapter, but I decided to take a chance and read one more chapter; I'm glad I did! I really want this baby to be jarod's for what it's worth!
Please post again soon!
| Pretenderlove chapter 6 . 2/3/2004
I can't believe MP's baby is invisible!
How can you be so mean to her..Lol...I love the idea... And that things Lydia remember is so awful...poor Lydia! I really hope the fireman is Jarod and that he can save Lydia...Update soon, please, please, please...
| Michelle chapter 5 . 1/24/2004
I like the story although I'm not much for such horrible things happening to my favorite characters.
I sincerely hope that that baby is Jarods, not Danes. It's the Centre afterall-it could happen. : )
Also, I have to agree about the beta reader; there were times I was distracted by the grammar; I corrected it in my head, but that can get tiring. Overall, though, I like it a lot.
| Nancy chapter 5 . 1/21/2004
Wow - lots going on here, and none of it bodes too well right now. I am glad that Jarod with Angelo's help was able to escape. The reunion of MP and J is bittersweet; her condition is not simple to deal with; more bad news Lydia may be in the Centre - then we are in the Centre and evil Raines is torturing her. She has bad self-esteem issues when she does tell Raines. Will Angelo be able to know this news and relay it to everyone so that they are safely gone when evil Raines' forces/sweepers get there? I very much look forward to the next posting. Thanks!
| Mary chapter 1 . 12/10/2003
Great so far. So said that what happened to Miss Parker. Mr. Parker is a bastard. I really hope Lyle is not dead, I hope he is just critically hurt and will survive, he just found his family. I also hope Jarod gets out, which I know he will. Love that Jarod almost said "I love you" and Miss Parker said it to Lydia, now they just have to say it to each other.
| TML9115 chapter 2 . 11/25/2003
i wanna see where this goes and what happens to lyle. cant have him die. agian i like this story and i hope you put up the next chapter soon...
| TML9115 chapter 1 . 11/25/2003
hey great story
i love the idea of both less then perfect and pretender together. and the idea of lyle being good. everyone makes him out to be a jerk. this story is great
| Keleios chapter 2 . 10/22/2003
Wow. I like this one lots. What happened to Lyle? More please :)