Reviews for Hold Me While I'm Here |
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![]() ![]() GO HBP! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good |
![]() ![]() Is he ever gonna get his hair and glasses back? |
![]() ![]() Yeah what's with the blond hair, his hair is black and will always be, in my heart |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel very sad that I cannot see the follow-up of this story |
![]() ![]() I'm sorry you gave up on this... and after all of those promises too. |
![]() ![]() I would have liked to read about the fight, as it is a little confusing while you are reading that part, but other then that, it is good so far. |
![]() ![]() I feel like something has to give. Harry has to slip, or one of them has to slip. |
![]() ![]() I feel like them only being on prank 374 or whatever it was is not realistic. I feel like by their sixth year they would have been in the thousands at least |
![]() ![]() I’m just curious how Harry is going to explain his name showing up as Harry Potter on the map |
![]() ![]() Je pense que Harry a eu chaud sur ce coup la imaginer si Rémus avait découvert le secret tant convoiter de Harry ça aurait été chaud et il aurait eu du mal à s'expliquer avec Rémus. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pleaseeeeeeee update this fic its amazing |
![]() ![]() I feel like this is going around in circles. Harry does something, Siri is suspicious. Harry doesn’t do something, Siri is again suspicious. It’s more than halfway through the fic, but I feel like I’m stuck at the first chapter and going around in circles. And canon Harry was not super powerful or extraordinary, but he worked brilliant under pressure. Never in my life have I read a fic where a 6th year Harry is attacked by a snake that’s not controlled by voldie. For god’s sake, Harry fought and survived a voldie-controlled BASILISK at 12. That’s it. I’m not wasting any more time on this fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant story, I hope to be able to read the ending one day |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish Ron and a Hermione had come back with him. |